Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 9th episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . As I’m currently in 11th grade and I have exams now so I can only post short episodes. I’ll try to give big episodes . From April 3rd I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical errors I’m sorry . Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.
I’ll mainly focus only on AvNeil story .
If you have missed the 9th episode here’s the link
Episode 9 here
Enjoy the episode
Mall – washroom and near food court
In the washroom
Aman tries to call umesh but umesh doesn’t pick up .
Aman : (to himself) what happened to him now ?
Suddenly he gets a call from unknown number
Aman : unknown number ? It might be umesh (picks the call) hello umesh ?
Person : (in call) it’s not umesh but me dushyant .
Aman : dushyant you ? What happened ? And where’s umesh ? I’m waiting for him in the mall ?
Dushyant : what ! You don’t know that ACP Neil Khanna’s team caught him !
Aman gets shocked
Aman : What ! And how !
Dushyant : seems like police are trying to track us ! They might be following us too . They might be there on mall too . So be careful .
Aman cuts the call .
Aman : (thinks ) police here i mall ? I don’t want to get caught ! I need to leave this place as soon as possible .
Aman leaves the washroom .
Near the food court
Avni takes the ice cream cones in her right hand and lemonade in her left hand .
Avni starts walking but suddenly she collides with a person and the chocolate ice cream falls down .
Avni : oops !
Person : yikes !
The person turns out to be Neil . Neil and Avni get shocked seeing each other . They stare at each other .
Avni : (shocked seeing Neil ) You !
Neil : (shocked seeing Avni ) you again ? oh my god ! Why did I meet this crazy person again !
Avni : Now I can say that your definitely following me ! And don’t call me crazy !
Neil : I’m not following you but I feel like you do .
Avni : Have you ever seen your face ? You look like a monkey . And do you think I would ever follow a brainless person like you mr.crack?
Neil : MIND YOUR TONGUE ! AND YEAH I’M NOT FOLLOWING YOU !
Avni : SAME EVEN I’M NOT !
Neil : This is a mall . Many people come here and for your kind information they’re not following you .
Avni : and yeah you can’t even drive properly and you can’t walk properly too . You are blind Mr.Crack !
Neil : Stop calling me that !
Avni : And yeah I wanted to ask you . what about my bag ?
Neil : Bag ? (Sees riya’s bag with Avni) you’re having it with you !
Avni : (rolls her eyes) god … not this one but the one Which I left in you car ? I need it right now !
Neil : Oh yeah that bag …. Actually I … (lies to Avni) I threw it !
Avni : (shouts at Neil) WHAT ! YOU THREW MY BAG !
Neil : yes ! I just said I threw it ! Didn’t you hear ? Are you deaf ?
Avni angrily stares at Neil . Crowd gathers and Neil’s team member DD, jaspreet and suketu come there and see Neil fighting with Avni .
DD : (thinks) Miss Avni ? Oh god Neil sir is again fighting with her !
Jaspreet : (to suketu) What ! Neil sir was searching for Aman Mehta and now he’s fighting with a girl ? What happened ?
Suketu : Let’s see .
Avni : I HATE YOU ! You threw my bag in which I had many anime series .
Neil : I’m not responsible for that you crazy girl ! You were careless !
Aman comes there and sees what’s happening and he sees Avni fighting with Neil .
Aman : (thinks) what is she doing now ?
Aman goes near Avni . Riya too comes there
Avni : (to neil) I’m not crazy ! Even I have a name . I’m Avni Mehta !
Neil : see whatever your name is Avni Mehta or something else I don’t care .
Aman : excuse me (to Avni ) Avni What are you doing ? Why are you fighting ?
Avni : Aman bhai see Na this guy is so annoying !
Neil : (to Aman) oh so you are her brother ah ? Please ask her to keep her mouth shut and take her away .
Aman confusingly stares at AvNeil
Avni : Aman bhai see Because of this crack I dropped my favourite ice cream .
Avni points at the ice cream cone which she dropped in the floor
Neil : So What ? That was an accident ! You have another one in your hand Na ?
Avni : that’s for my sister ! Because of you I dropped my favourite chocolate ice cream !
Neil rolls his eyes and takes the ice cream cone from the floor
Neil : (shows the ice cream cone to Avni) Here take your ice cream cone now eat it !
Avni angrily stares at Neil . She then takes the ice cream cone from Neil’s hand .
Avni spreads the chocolate and the raspberry ice cream on Neil’s face .
Neil coughs and He is furious .
DD , Jaspreet & Suketu : Oh My GOD !
Suketu : for the first time I’m seeing someone behaving like this with Neil sir .
Aman : Avni What the hell are you doing ! (Stops Avni)
Riya : (keeps her hands on her mouth)
Neil gets furious . DD , Jaspreet and suketu try to control their laughter seeing Neil’s face
Neil : YOU SPREAD ICE CREAM ON MY FACE ! DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM ?
Avni : YOU ARE A CRACK !
Neil : YOU ARE MESSING WITH ME NEIL KHANNA . A POLICE OFFICER !
Aman gets shocked when Neil says he’s police officer Neil khanna . He remembers dushyant saying police officers are following them .
Aman : (thinks ) oh god ! Police ! That too ACP Neil khanna ? I need to leave right now !
Avni : Mr.Neil Khanna …So What if you are a police officer ?
Riya : Avni leave it !
Aman starts acting weird
Aman : (to Avni) Avni .. lets go ..
Neil : yeah please . Take her .
Avni : you shut up !
Aman : Avni come … aren’t you getting late ? You need to go to work at the afternoon right ?
Neil : (thinks) now why’s her brother acting weird now ?
Avni : work ? Bhai today is Sunday !
Aman : Ugh … no but you said Vidyut called you and asked you to come to office right ?
Avni : eh ? Did Vidyut say anything like that ? And when did I say like …
Aman : (cuts Avni in between ) let’s go now
Aman takes avni’s hand and riya’s hand and they go out . The crowd too disperses .
nishant comes there and stands near DD, suketu and Jaspreet . They see Neil’s Face . Neil goes to washroom to wash his face
Nishant : (to Jaspreet and suketu) What happened to neil sir ?
Jaspreet : a girl and sir started fighting . She got angry and she did this to sir .
DD , nishant , Jaspreet and suketu start laughing .
Neil comes out the washroom .
Neil : I have never met a crazy girl like her !
Neil Sees His team laughing at him .
Neil : (to his team) WHAT !
DD,Jaspreet , suketu , nishant are unable to control their laughter
Neil : (rolls his eyes) guys you all know how that girl behaved with me ? You all are my team mates and my friends too . Even you all are laughing at me !
DD : what to do sir ? You were looking funny !
Neil : anyways let’s go from here !
Nishant : but sir …
Neil : (cuts nishant in between ) let’s go from here .
Neil thinks about Avni spreading chocolate ice cream on his face
Neil : (thinks) no one has behaved like this with me . Thank god her brother took her away and they left the mall . (To DD) And yeah where’s that guy Umesh Mehta ?
DD : he’s near the book shop . Kamal is with him .
Neil : say them that we’re leaving now and ask them to come outside .
DD : ok sir .
Neil : (Remebers Aman acting weird) but why was her brother acting very weird seeing me ?
Neil and his team leave the mall .
Scene 2 :
Aman is driving the vehicle . Riya and Avni take the sandwich , French fries and pizza from riya’s bag and they start eating .
Riya : Avni you got so many things .
Avni : I’m very hungry . Now let’s start eating .
Riya : me too .
They start eating .
Aman : don’t mess the car !
Riya & Avni : we know !
Aman : (takes one sandwich ) thank god ! We left that place
Avni : I hate that Neil Khanna ! He threw my bag !
Riya : Avni ! Just forget it . Let’s get a new bag .
Avni : but I had many manga and anime series DVD in that ! I lost everything .All because of that stupid crack ACP NEIL KHANNA!
Aman : I’ll get you a new one Avni . Now you both keep quite for sometime .
Aman , Riya and Avni reach home .
Scene 3 :
Khanna mansion – hall and Neil’s room
Neil and DD go to Khanna mansion .
Neil is still angry about what happened in the mall .
Shweta and Neeraj see Neil and DD entering .
Neeraj is seen eating ice cream
Neil enters home
DD : hi aunty , Neeraj
Neeraj : Hey DD .
Shweta : hey DD … and yeah finally my Tillu came home ..
Neeraj : bhai want some ice cream ?
Neil remembers Avni spreading ice cream on his face .
Neil : I DON’T WANT ANYTHING !
Neil angrily goes to his room .
Shweta : (sees neil upset and going inside his room ) what happened to him now ? Why is he always like this ?
Shweta goes to kitchen .
Neeraj : (eats the ice cream) What happened to neil bhai again ?
DD : he met that girl in the mall again and started fighting with her again
Neeraj : (confused) eh ? Which girl ?
DD : That girl.. what’s her name ? … yeah .. miss Avni .
Neeraj : the girl who took bhai to hospital and saved his life ?
DD : yeah .
Neeraj : he was not nice to her and he was behaving rudely with her in the hospital too . Now what happened?
DD narrates about what happened in the mall . He says about Neil acting rudely with Avni and Avni spreading ice cream on Neil’s face .
Neeraj : Wh… What ! She spread ice cream on Bhai’s face ! No one had the guts to argue with Neil bhai but she ! I can’t believe this ! Anyways . DD do you want ice cream ?
DD : of course !
Neeraj and DD start eating ice cream
In Neil’s room
Neil keeps thinking about Avni .
Neil : how dare that girl Avni Mehta can mess with me ? Thank god her brother took her away and left .
He remembers Aman acting weird seeing him .
Neil : why did that Avni mehta’s brother was acting weird when I said I’m a police officer ?
He then remembers Avni calling her brother Aman .
Neil : wait wait …. that Avni called her brother Aman ….. and … that avni’s sur name is Mehta . Let me recollect Avni called her brother Aman . And her sur name is Mehta . That means ….. Her brother is Aman Mehta !
Neil is shocked to know that avni’s brother is Aman Mehta .
Precap : Neil calls Avni . Neil interrogates Aman . Neil and Aman have a argument .
I’ll post the next episode only on April 3rd .
I hope you all liked the episode . And sorry for the late update . And I won’t drag it , I’ll try to end it soon And silent readers do leave your feedbacks .