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A New Year which i cannot forget ! An Avneil FS – Last part

Firstly I m hell sorry guys to leave this story incomplete I just got busy with studies and I hope u guys still remember me and my story ……..well which does not seem possible so incase if u guys don’t remember my story I am sharing links below for you guys nd do forgive me plzzzz.

A new year which i cannot forget! An Avneil FS

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A new year which i cannot forget! An Avneil FS Part – 4

A new year which i cannot forget! An Avneil FS Part – 5

Avni Mumbai and greets neela

Neela: so how was ur trip

Avni: trip was good

Neela: waise kya ab tum ready ho

Avni: ( with a sigh ) haan fine

Neela:  toh thik the guy and his family will come tomorrow morning

Avni: maa I just came back and u want me to meet him

Neela : itni jaldi thodi bhulaya hai he is coming tomorrow morning

Avni: maa looks like u don’t love me and want me to sent off soon

Neela: avni u know na I am just doing this because I want u to laugh happily from heart which u have closed and trust me this guy is good he is swetha ji’s son

Avni: fine maa

The next morning avni was getting ready to meet and neela comes

Neela: avni what are u doing beta they all are waiting for u

Avni: yes maa just a minute and plzz calm urself first, u woke up early and cooked everything for them that to just for a meeting it’s not even my wedding yet …….if u will take stress like this then I’ll say no

Neela: avni look I am your mother so isn’t it common for me ……..okay baba I’ll not take much stress so now let’s go plzz it doesn’t look good to keep them waiting this much

Avni: fine let’s go

( avni and neela goes down and avni sees only a lady and a man )

Neela: avni meet swetha ji and his husband prakash khanna, I hope u remember she is my friend too

Avni : yaa maa Namaste aunty …. Namaste uncle

Neela : waise swetha ji woh …….

( and to avni’s surprise neil take a entry and greets neela and smiles at avni )

Neil: kaha tha zarur milenge …..

Avni: ( angrily ) tum……aur matlab tumhe pata tha ke mera aur tumhara rishta hone waala hai isliye tumne kaha hum zarur milenge

Neela: woh actually avni ……I asked neil to….

Neil: aunty let me explain woh avni

Avni: matlab maa aapne bheja ……..oh isliye aap ne mujhe permission di kyuki aap isse bhej rahi thi……nd u what do u have to explain haan didn’t I told u that I hate liars

( and she walks upstairs to terrace and neil gives neela a sign of assurance to let him handle avni nd goes behind her …………avni looks at other side and neil looking at back with a distance says)

Neil: I am sorry avni, I know u hate it but if I told u at that time then u would’ve comeback nd scold me at that time only ……………………and most importantly I want to look after you as I promised neela maa and the other thing is I wanted us to understand each other without forcing ourselves too like and get marry ………………and thanks to that trip I got to know u and I think I have fallen for u

Avni: ……….

Neil: avni yaar I am sorry na ……please say something

( avni starts laughing leaving neil shocked and turns back)

Avni: what did u thought I would forgive u …………….if I had not known this from starting na I would’ve seriously marry other guy

Neil: matlab u know this from start then y did u not tell me and y did u do this drama

Avni: Ulta chor kotwal ko daante ……u were the one was doing a drama ……I just played along …….u guys thought I would not know u but since maa and swetha aunty are best friends they keep doing video calls one day I just randomly saw ur pic since maa asked me to talk to her as she was doing some stuff ……looks like they too forget that thing or might’ve not known that i would’ve seen ur pic which was hanged on a wall

Neil: so u were just angry that I didn’t tell u about my identity I thought u were more upset about our marriage meet

Avni : who said I am not ……it’s just I was angry

Neil: it means u knew this too……..avni u na ……

Avni: at first I didn’t when I met u on new year’s night I just recognized u as swetha ji’s son tillu ( nd laughs saying it ) that’s y I thought to change resort if u recognized me nd said maa regarding those pervert guys…..but u followed me at hotel I got suspicious of u but then I overheard ur conversation with ur mom at dinner.

(flashback of their dinner where avni goes to washroom nd was coming back and over hears neil talking to swetha )

Neil: maa I just don’t think it’s right too not to tell avni who I am and mostly regarding our marriage meet

Swetha: I know but just think if u guys can know each other before formal introduction won’t it be good waise tumlog abhi kahan ho

Neil: haan mein uske saath hu nd abhi woh……….{ he sees avni } okay maa talk to u later .

( end of  flashback )

Avni: I got angry at that time and thought to make u runaway from here …..but then seeing ur guilt from hiding the fact on ur face and mostly importantly I understood why maa was so calm while sending me to pune ……..so I thought to tell u how I feel about marriage ……..nd then by then end of the trip (looking to him lovingly in his eyes ) I was fallen for u too

( they both hug each other )

Avni: trust me neil it’s hard for me to trust u and specially when u were lying nd if I had not known everything na I would’ve not forgive and would’ve marry someone

Neil: waise I am sorry for hiding I just promised them so……nd yeah u are booked with me for this life and I’ll make sure in all life time….. so don’t say u will get marry to someone else.

Avni: okay baba

Neil: chale neeche tumne sabko tension mein daala tha .

(Few years later )

Teen girl : mom was ur favorite new year memory

Avni: meeting ur dad Ayesha

Ayesha: u met him on new years

Avni: actually we know each other since childhood since ur granny’s our best friend but we actually saw each other after ages and it was too filmy as he was saving me from pervert guys  nd ….

Neil: nd ur mom fell in love with me as a heroine falls in love while watching hero fighting

Avni : neil as I guess u don’t remember but u didn’t fight with them instead u just make me run away such far that we got lost in jungle…

(Ayesha laughing hearing that )

Neil: humari beti ke saamne bolne zaruri tha kya ( with a frown face)

Avni : aacha baba sorry ……………. Aur ab tum nhi mane toh ( avni asking Ayesha to tickle from other side by signaling and they both tickles him nd the trio laughs )


Hope u all like it nd if u do then plz like and give ur comments. I am planning to write a fan fiction on dev and sona but I’ll make sure that i complete the story nd then post for not disappointing u guys as before.

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