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Tashan E Ishq Mohabbat Ka Ek Naya Andhaz Episode 23 and 24 (Holi gift!!!) #KeepingTashanEIshqAlive

Hey Guyss!!!! I know its been an awfully long time sinces I have posted but I haven’t because I have not seen my all-time commenters comments leading me to think that they might be too busy in their exams… My lovely commenters have always been my priority so decided to take short break so that once their exams are over and they try to catch up, its not a burden on them… But the good news is this is episode 23 and 24…So DISCLAIMER  – Its going to be a very long episode somake sure you have time!!!! And this is my HOLI GIFT to you all… Hope you all had an amazing holi, cuz I did and it is one of my favourite festival!!! Comment below how your holi was…Another thing I want to talk about is that I am sorry for not replying to your comments… I planned to do it today but realised that the comments got closed… So sorry!!! And special mention – Please watch Rimorav once your exams are over or when you are planning on break….

So the comments for my previous update was by – Presha, Ananya_DSK, Fenil(reply – I know right, they are just amazing…), Yashika (reply – Thank you so  much… Yeah actually I feel bad for Kunj and once we reach there you will feel more bad for him…and yes, Vireka is goalss!!!), SSK(Thank you… The goa trip part don’t get too excited because I fear its not going to be like you have imagined it…), Twinj2000(hey Sanju, thank you and glad to know you loved it… sure take your time…) and Ramya(thank you so much Ramya…)

So now, lets get started…

RECAP – We stopped midway of Vireeka conversation…

Viren – Jeevika, tum Virat se mili

Jeevika – Virat! Virat ayya hua he kiya…

Viren – Haan… abhi abhi ayya hai… woh meinnay hi kaha tha jaa kar araam kare, woh travel ke wajah se bohot tired hai… Subah mil layna…

Jeevika – haan mein subah mil loongi…Paar essay hi yuheen achaanak kaisay ana hua…

Viren – Nahi woh Yuvi ke problem ki wajah se mainay hee bulaya hai

Jeevika –Oh achaa… Kuch discuss ke tum longone

Viren – Nahi aaj raat Virat ko rest karne ki zaroorath hai… Humnay soch hai ki kaal discuss karthe hai…

 

(and here starts today’s episode…)Jeevika – Oh I see… You know mahi and manvi is also coming … I am so excited…

Viren – Haan Kunj ne bataya tha mujhai… Par woh seeda Dilli kyun aa rahi hai

Jeevika – Woh unhai Chandighar mein job milgaayi hai par uss company ke India ke Headquaters Delhi main hai… So undhonon ko wahan ek interview aur uske bade two day training…

Viren – Oh I see… Well sunnay ko tho yeh bhi ayya hai ki Twinkle, mahi, manvi aur tumhari cousins girls only trip pe jaa rahi hai…

Jeevika – Haan woh Ritu ka bacherlotte trip hai…

Viren – Par tum kyun nahi jaa rahe ho?

Jeevika – Mathlab?

Viren – Mathlab, Tumhay bhi jana chahiye?

Jeevika – (smiles) Ghar aur aap sabko chodkar? Aap Twinkle ke tarah kyun baat kar raahi ho?

Viren – I didn’t get you? Tumhara mathlab kya hai?

Jeevika – Virenji, Mein iss ghar ki bahu hoon, meri yehan kitni zimedaari hai … Aaplo lagtha hai mein jaongi?

Virenji – Tum apne yeh bahu wale kirdaar na, kuh zyada hee seriously le rahi ho. Mujhai lagtha hai tumhay jana chahiye, afterall all you cousins are going?

Jeevika – Aapke raai jaankar khushi huyi par essa kuch nahi hoon wala… (and stands up to go)

Viren – Kyun Jeevika?

Jeevika – wajah mein bata chuki hoon (and she leaves. Viren dials Twinkle)

Twinkle – Kya hua Jiju? Kaam hua?

Viren – Nahi Twinkle, kya batao mein tujhai?

Twinkle – Nahi maani?

Viren – Nahi yaar… ek tho tum janti ho ki ussay khudse door bejna mere liya kitna mushkil hai… uske bawajood mein ussay bejnay ki khoshish kar rahi hoon… Par woh hai ke maanhi nahi rahi hai?

Twinkle – Haan aap sahi keh rahi ho… Pata nahi kya karu? Yeh Ritu bhi kitna upset hai di ke mana karne ki wajah se…

Viren – Abh mein kya karu?

Twinkle – Philhaal aap jitna ho sakhe utna unhai manao

Viren – Hmmm… Koshish karongi…

Twinkle – Jiju aap ek kaam kyun nahi karthi, (and reveals her idea)

Viren – Tumhai lagta hai yeh kaam karega?

Twinkle – Haan agar teek se execute kiya jai tho kaam karega…

Viren – pakka??

Twinkle – Haan baba pakka… Aap kitna darthe ho di se?

Viren – Mein… Mein koi darthi warthi nahi hoon par hum joot bol rahe hai na, issliye baar baar pooch rahi hoon

Twinkle – Haan haan janti hoon mein…

Viren – Twinkkkklllleee

Twinkle – teek hai Jiju mein rakthi hoon, byyyyeee!!!!(and she cuts the call)

Morning – Taneja Mansion… Backyard …. Viren, Virat, Kunj, Yuvraj, Twinkle, and Jeevika…

Viren – Virat, bolo yaar, tumhay inn sab ke baare mein kya kehna hai… Tum tho London mein dekha hoga dhonon ko sath sath…

Twinkle – Haan dekha tho hoga na?

Virat (nods) – Meinay dekha hai… Yuvi ne mujhsai milaya hai ussay… Kuch waqt se Yuvi bohot badla hua dektha tha mujhai… Pehle ki tarah pubs aur parties mein bilkul nahi jaati thi… Humesha kaam aur padaai mein itna busy rahthe the ki… Mere ghar mein bhi aanay ke waqt nahi milthe the… Aur bacha kucha jo waqt hotha thaw oh uss ladki ke sath bethathe the… She studies in his same uni… (everyone scans Yuvi…)

Viren – Yuvi… Tum tho jaa rahe the na ussay layne ke liye…

Yuvraj – Jab kismet inti foti ho tho koi kya kar saktha hai… Woh London chodkar jaa raha hai… Mein bohot rokh ne ki koshish ki par woh manni he nahi…

Viren – array tum kah rahi ho ki woh London chodkar jaa rahi hai…Abhi tak gaya tho nahi na, phir tum jaa kar ussay rokthi kyun nahi ho…

 

Yuvraj – nahi yaar, woh London chodkar uss din jaa rahi thi jis din mein London janay ka phaisla kiya tha… Ussay tho job yahan India mein mila tha paar meinnay har London arrival wale airport ke information check kiya… Paar woh India pahunchi hi nahi… So I thought maybe she just lied to me about leaving London just to get rid of me… So I contacted all her friends but she is not in London… I am going crazy searching her… I really don’t know what to do… (and he gets frustrated)

Viren – Okay …. Relax…We will do something…Lets wait for while till she settles down somewhere… And then we will find her out… Okay? (Yuvi sighs and then nods…)

Twinkle – Par uska naam kya hai?

Yuvi (smiles) – Uska naam…

Leela – Tea time bachoooo!!!! (everyone turns to see Leela and two maids standing with a trays of tea and breakfast)

Kunj – Leela aunty, bade sahi waqt aaye ho aap… Waisay bhi bohot dinon hogayi hai aapke haath ke samousa kaye hua…

Leela – Janti hoon issiliye tumhare liye specially mein yeh banaya hai…

And everyone eats, chatters and laughs …

Viren – Tho teek hai, hum chalthe… Jeevika, Kunj, Virat and Yuvi, lets leave…

Virat – Mein hotel jaa rahi hoon… Mein ghar nahi rah paongi

Viren – But I thought you will stay with us because yesterday you…

Virat – Yesterday I came home directly because I thought you wanted to talk immediately and I was too tired to book a hotel so I thought I will stay at home but I was insulted enough for that…

Viren – Insulted?!

Kunj – Did mom say something?

Virat – Bhai (Viren), I am not like you… I am not strong enough to take all her taunts… Aur kyun sahe hum, kyun sunnay hum? Hum galat thodi na hai? Galat tho woh hai jisne hum dhonon ke haqq mara hai apne tanoon se… mein chup hoon tho sirf Papa, Kunj aur Yuvi ke wajah se… Par bardaash ke bhi haad hothe hai Bhai… Kab tak Bhai, kab tak…

Viren – Viraat…

Virat – Aap mere liye ek chota sa apartment kareed sakthe ho? Rooz rooz hotel mein rehne se tho acha hai agar meri ek apartment ho tho mein wahi rah paungi…

Kunj – Nahi bhayya pls… Aap kahi nahi jaogi…

Virat –  Kunj, I have some self respect… How do you think I can stay there…

Kunj – Bhayya aap pls humare sath ghar tak chalo… I promise you mein sab teek kardongi…

Virat – Kunj!

Kunj – bhayya pls, ek moka tho dho aapne chote bhai ko? (Virat looks on)

Vadhera Mansion

The four brothers are standing at the door… Kunj steps in…

Kunj (screams) – Mom!!!! Mom!!!!

Usha comes down the stairs….

Usha – Sunny boy… (and she sees the three of them at the door…)Yuvi boy andhar aao na…

Yuvi – Kyun mom? Aapke nazar kya itna kamzoor hogaya hai that you can’t see my two brother who are standing next to me…

Usha – Well I don’t care… Isn’t that evident? (And she smirks)

Kunj – You don’t care right?  So even we don’t care about people who doesn’t care about our brothers…

Yuvi – Hum sab iss ghar ko chodkar jaa rahe hai, Aapko aapka ghar mubaarak ho!

Precap

Kunj – Mom agar aap chati ho ki hum yahan rahe tho aapko humare baat manni hogi… Aap yeh karna he hoga…

Usha – Teek hai mein karongi…

So that was my double episode… hope you all loved… there is a lot of drama and revealation coming ahead… I am so excited to shar with you all…. Well if you like the current track, comment below!!! Well lets head to the QOTD

Question of the day –  What do think is the drawback or the shortcoming of my ff? Where are the areas you all would want me to improve in?

I want every reader of mine to answer this question so that I know and realise my shortcoming and so that I can write better and serve you guys better, So please I want maximum response… I used to think that onlt the few commenters of mine reads the ff but because of the likes and dislikes I know over 25 people reads my ff… So pls comment or atleast personal message my your response to my QOTD…

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Loads of love

~Pooja Makawani

 

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