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Swasan- A complicated love story!! (68)

@Next day Morning..

Everybody is sitting on dinning table for breakfast.. everyone’s face is gloomy n all were quite..

Tension was clearly seen on their faces.. only sound in the whole house is just of cute aadit trying to grab everyone’s attention by his cute antics..

N our little piya was looking at naughty aadit with her big doe eyes sitting in her mommy’s lap..

Everyone smiled a little seeing their antics..

After a while .. Swara came down all ready..

Sujata- puttar.. are u going somewhere??

Swara- ha ma.. i m thinking to join hospital again n i have already talked with doc singhania.. n he asked me to join from today only..

Sujata nooded..

Rp- par beta.. u r not completely well yet.. (cut off)

Swara- papaji.. dont worry.. see..(rotated showing herself) i m perfectly alright..(she said this with fake smile)

Everybody know that she is faking to be happy in front of them but still they are happy that she is trying to overcome this situation..

Rp- ok ok .. baba.. i know u r fine.. but i will permit u to join hospital only when u promise me to take care of yourself.. n will take ur food n medicine on time.. got it..

Swara- sure.. papaji.. (salute.. in fun) jo hukum..

He laughed seeing her antics..

Everybody was talking and laughing but sanskar was just observing her every action with moist eyes..

He interrupted..

Danskar- swara!!

She looked at him but avoided him..

He felt bad but didn’t react..

Sanky- wont u forgive me ever??

Swara- (stand up from chair ) i need time.. (calmly)

Swara- (to all) chalo.. i think i m getting late.. i need to leave.. (hugged sujatan Rp n left)

Everybody was sad.. seeing their both children in pain..


Swara came back from hospital all tired .. her eyes were showing her tiredness..

Nobody was in hall..

Ladies of family were in kitchen..

Ragini with aadit and piya…

Lucky n adi were in their office.. n Rp in study..

Sanskar entered just after swara n saw her sitting on sofa all tired placing her head on side with closed eyes.. he could easily guess that she is tired..

Sanskar hurriedly bought a glass of water n bought it in front of her..

Swara saw the water glass n grabbed it quickly..

Swara- (without noticing) thanks maa.. i was in no mood to even get up n take water..

Sanskar smiled seeing her relieved..

As she was about to drink water.. she saw upward to find sanskqrwith water…

She placed the water glass on table n left to her room ignoring him..

Sanskar felt really bad n left from there..

Sujata observed everything.. n she too felt bad..

Sujata- (monologue) I cant see my children in pain.. what should i do god?? so that my children will always remain happy.. Plz solve their every problem soon..

N she too left from there n took snacks for swara in her room…

Swara was sitting on bed having her head rested on headboard.. eyes closed..

Sujata reached upto her n put the tray in front of swara n sat there only..

She was her face clearly showing tear marks as if she was crying..

She extended her hands n wiped her tears.. Sensing her touch.. Swara opened her eyes.. n composed herself..

She just hugged sujata n sobbed a little and composed herself..

Sujata feed her n left her alone to give her time to think about her decision..

@sansjar’s room

Sujata entered sanskar’s room with tray of snacks.. Afterall he is her son too.. n she cant ignore her child..

Sanskar was sitting on couch with his head placed between his palms..

Suju reached upto him n settled herself beside sanskar.. n placed tray on table..

Sensing some movement.. Sanskar looked up and find her mom sitting there.. His eyes were filled with tears..

Suju nooded in no n wiped his tears with her dupatta..

Sanskat hugged her n cried for sometime.. He placed his head in her lap still being on couch n sobbed..

No one spoke anything .. Suju was just caressing his hairs in order to make him calm..

After a while when sanskar felt something good.. he started speaking..

Sanskar- maa.. m i that bad that she is ignoring me completely..(water still flowing from his eyes).. (Suju too was crying seeing his son in such situation)

Maa.. i .. i i cant tolerate her ignorance.. maa tell her to punish me.. beat me.. plz maa plz ask her to speak to me.. plz maa. plz.. i cant tolerate her ignorance..
Till yesterday.. she was my best friend.. my best buddy with whom i could share anything.. she too used to share her every problem with me.. but see .. now.. i became a stranger for her.. No no.. not stranger.. i m her culprit.. but maa.. when i did something wrong with her.. then she should punish me na..?? why is she doing this.. i can’t maa.. i cant..
in last few months.. she became my everything maa.. everything.. i .. i cant live without her.. i will die maa.. i will DIE..

Sujata mde him stand.. n cupped his face.. n wiped his tears..

Sujata do u think it is the only solution..??

Sanskar was blank..

Sujata- u too know that she too had some feelings for u n i too know.. what do u think will she be happy if u will die?? (Sanskar was just staring her)

Nhi puttar.. its not done..

When u have done some mistake then u should ask forgiveness.. u should repent.. but DYING is not the solution..

N what about me? what would i do when something will happen to u?? kabhi socha h..??

Sanskar puttar.. she is not the only one in ur life.. others are there too.. who care for u.. even she cares for u.. but now she is just upset.. she need time..

U give her some time to overcome this.. but u should not stop ur efforts to make her forgive u.. when she will be in a state to think wisely.. then she will only punish u.. n u should be ready for ur punishment..

I hope u understood what i said..?

sanskar nooded..

Chalo now.. wipe ur tears n be happy for me n complete ur snacks.. fresh n up n after resting come down for dinner..

Suju left.. not before pecking his forehead with utmost love n care of mother..

Sanskar was left alone in thoughts..

Hows the episode friends..?? i hope u like it..
After so much thinking about what should be the next.. i wrote something..

I m thinking a new twist in the fiction.. i hope u will support me in that tooo…

Bbyee … take care..

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