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Preetan FF : Truth Of Life Part 73

Everybody gets tensed due to Tanya’s sudden high fever after incidence.

Rishab : what are you all saying?

Kritika : bhai its true Preeta’s illusion is right, there is something wrong in this place or else why would suddenly Tanya’s get sick

Karan : oh come on you know Tanya gets worried in small things

Preeta : really? is she so weak to faint by somebody’s word please

Dhruv ; guys calm down first if there is really wrong here lets just leave from here

Sahil : Dhruv is right lets go back anyway we had spend enough time

“Rishab bhai, our foreign clients called they will only wait for two more days or else the whole contract will get canceled” Sameer informs him about business problem

Rishab : I don’t care how can I leave Tanya alone here and how will we take her in this condition

Kritika ; bhai Mumbai is not so far, it will be only 5 hours drive lets go back, and don’t worry about car I will drive

Sameer : are you sure? only you and Tanya know how to drive or else one of us will come with you

Roo : dont’ worry bhai we will manage

Shrishti : I have an idea lets wait till Tanya recovers and then leave what if something happens on midway

Karan : tall pole you girls were craving too much for staying here now what happened

Preeta : can we save this for later, lets wait till she recovers and then leave as soon as we can from here

Everybody goes back to their room upset about recent incidence

Roo starts getting doubt about the incidences in the palace.

Sahil : what are you thinking?

Roo : I have strong feeling something is wrong in this place, Preeta bhabhi’s illusion is right

Sahil : how can you be so sure?

Roo takes him to the room and opens the computer she brought

Sahil : what are you upto

Roo : wait a minute please (finds something) have a look at this

Sahil : this is history for the palace

“That woman was right, this mansion is cursed by very old spirit but we have to find somebody who knows better” Ruchika suggest him

Sahil : but how will we find? this place is like 100 years ago and what does that spirit wants

Roo : whoever it is will only target bhabhi’s and Kritika di because they are married

Sahil : we can find something from this palace itself what say

Roo : you are so smart (says sarcastically) but now will you also say how will we find in such big mansion

Sahil : we are so many people I am sure somebody will find small thing

Ruchika and Sahil starts finding clues in the mansion. They are about to reach the door in basement but gets clue outside.

“Sahil look what is this” Roo finds piece of paper

Sahil : what? looks like paper of this mansion did somebody buy this

Karan : what are you both doing here?

Roo : bhai look what we found (gives him the paper they got)

Rishab : what is it?

Sahil : it says about the owner who bought this palace years ago but they died

Sameer : then whose name is this mansion is

Before they could read the name paper gets on fire itself. The girls starts shouting in fear seeing

Karan ; back off everybody

Rishab and Dhruv pours water on the fire. Furniture starts to break due to the power and lights flashes in whole mansion. Everybody starts running out while Rishab takes unconscious Tanya outside carrying her. The door closes on midway not letting anyone go outside.

Kritika : what is happening?

Preeta : told you that woman was right spirit here will not let us go from here now we are trapped

Karan ; nothing will happen to anybody okay (tries to calm her down)

Preeta : don’t give me false hope cant you see what is happening here

Rishab : we have to think another way to get rid of this problem

Shrishti sees something in the paper burnt

Sameer : what is it?

“where is Nawanagar village” Shrishti asks

Kritika : I think thats nearby village but its quite far from here why

Shrishti : there is address here of Nawanagar village maybe somebody can help us

Preeta : but how will we go there?

Sahil : if you all don’t mind me and Ruchika can go there and find somebody

Luthra brothers hesitates initially sending their sister to another place but agrees

Rishab ; take care of each other okay

Sahil : don’t worry she is my responsibility and I will bring her back safely

Karan gives hug to both of them before leaving. Sahil and Roo starts heading to Nawanagar by nearby bus at night.

Kritika : please take care okay (tells to her little sister emotionally)

Roo ; don’t worry di we will be fine

Sameer ; you are getting late, bus is leaves in 5 min hurry up

Dhruv : bey buddy

Sahil and Ruchika gets on the bus to Nawanagar. The rest goes back to the palace. Rishab does not want to inform their families

Karan ; you are right bhai but they are our parents I am sure they will find a way

Sameer : yes bhai lets call them , we won’t be able to handle this alone


Luthra house

Rakhi feels uneasy sensing her children’s in some sort of problem

Mahesh : why are you worrying? they are not kids, let them enjoy there

Rakhi : you don’t understand a mom can feel her child’s pain I know something is wrong

Mahesh ; okay let me call them

Rakhi : what happened

Mahesh : none of them are picking up my phone

Rakhi : i am telling you our children are not safe, let me call Sarlaji

Dadi : why are you troubling them

Rakhi calls Sarla

“Yes Rakhiji” Sarla asks her

Rakhi ; did you have any talk with Preeta or Shrishti, we can’t get their phones

Sarla : no why what happened

Suddenly Preeta and Shrishti’s picture frame breaks Rakhi and Sarla decides to go there and help their children.

Rishab calls Mahesh

“Where are you all? I am trying to call all of you, here your mom is getting tensed, just tell me everything is okay na?” Mahesh asks him

Rishab ; dad actually (tells him everything) and Tanya’s fever is not getting down instead its getting worst I am afraid about other girls

Mahesh : you all leave from there immediately

Rishab : we tried but could not that power is too strong and is not letting us leave

Mahesh : okay listen to me carefully you all stay together and we will leave right now, our blessing are with you nothing will happen take care

Rishab : okay dad (hangs up)

Mahesh : we have to leave as soon as possible our children are trapped in death and life

Rakhi : do you think we should consult a priest who can help us

Mahesh : but who? we don’t know anybody

Sarla : lets go there first our kids need us

The trio leaves for Rajasthan immediately.


The group is not able to sleep in fear in their rooms. Rishab holds Tanya’s hands sitting next to her.

“Karan I am scared please do something” Preeta pleads cryingly

“Baby doll listen to me god is with us and our parents also, I trust them we will get out of here safely I promise” Karan gives her solace

Nearby neighborhood palace 

A noted medium woman does the prayer in the house putting on fire.

“This is not happening good, god help them” she closes her eyes getting flashes about the palace group is staying

Later in midnight Preeta hears a whisper outside the room again. She starts walking like being possessed towards the door and gets the keys from the drawer.

The bus stops on highway at some hotel for few minutes. Sahil goes out to get signal from phone and call his mom. Roo follows outside to get some fresh air. The bus starts to leave and is missed by the duo.

Roo : no, this all happened because of you

Sahil : excuse me who told you to get off from the bus, I was trying to call mom

Roo : Mr forgetful my brothers gave you my responsibility now you should fulfill that

“Oh god where did I get trapped, please save me from this torture” Sahil teases her

Roo : torture? you are lucky to have spend time with me

Sahil : but I am not from those fools to like bear tantrums in spare time

Roo : you are so irritating, while ago you were so sweet with me

Sahil : can we please save your tantrums till we solve this problem lets go find some help, uncle is there other bus to nawanagar

Vendor : next one will come in the morning

Roo : what? till then

Vendor : there is lodge here if you want to stay there, bus will come at 8 in morning

Sahil : thank you

Roo : god not again, I am so tired and now this

Sahil : what do you expect? that I carry you in my arms please I don’t want to break my bones we have to do some work

Roo gets irritated with his antics. Both finds small lodge nearby to stay for night.

Sahil : hello can we get one double room

Roo : same room? no way

Sahil : we are not spending night for whole day only for few hours shut up

Worker : there you go (gives the keys)

Back in palace

Preeta reaches the haunted room and opens the door staring at lock. There is complete silence in the whole place. Preeta comes in her senses only to find herself trapped. She goes to run upstairs but a force pulls her inside rapidly and closes door. Nobody is able to hear her screams in dark night.


Roo and Sahil gets tensed thinking about the situation.

Roo ; in my whole life I never saw a real ghost and today I am shaking

Sahil : why do you have to see one when you are not less than ghost

Roo : please for god sake don’t joke, I wonder what will that spirit do to bhabhi and di

“Listen god always help the people who have pure heart, your bhabhis and di are true nothing will happen to them” Sahil assures her

Roo : thank you

Sahil : take some rest its quite late we have to reach the place tomorrow

Roo : good night


Karan feels Preeta’s absence but before he could look for her she comes back in room

Karan : where were you

Preeta does not answer weirdly and goes to bed making him bit anxious

Karan : strange she did not even answer my question never mind she might be tired

Next morning Sahil wakes up first to see Roo sleeping peacefully. He does not wish to wake her from sleep looking at the innocence. After a while both finds another bus and leaves for the village.


Karan : bhai how is Tanya?

Rishab : still same, I put the cloth on her head whole night but fever is still there

Sameer : I just hope we leave from here

Mahesh, Rakhi and Sarla arrives there relieving their children.

Shrishti ; thank god you came mom, we were so scared

Sarla : don’t worry we are here nothing will happen now where is Preeta

Kritika : I think she is upstairs let me go call her she won’t hear

Karan ; bhai yesterday night Preeta behaved bit weird

Rishab : why?

Karan : I don’t know she went somewhere and when I asked she didn’t say anything

Kritika goes upstairs to find Preeta but is not able to find. Somebody grabs her neck through rope near pillar making her scream. She manages to run from there

Dhruv : thats Kritika’s voice

The boys run to find her

Kritika keeps running when big swing hits on her head.

Dhruv ; oh my god Kritika? are you okay

Mahesh ; take her to the room quickly

Shrishti does bandage on her injury.

Dhruv ; did you see aunty? this is all happening where is Preeta

Preeta comes there without any tension making everybody curious.

Sarla : how is Tanya?

Rishab : she has been conscious from yesterday

“Preeta where were you, Kritika came to find you upstairs” Sameer asks her

Preeta : but I was outside (says casually) who said I am upstairs

Shrishti : did you not said you are going on terrace while ago

Preeta : you have become forgetful I went outside to nearby temple

Karan and Rishab senses fishy in her behavior quickly but does not mention. A neighbor next door suggest them about a experienced medium who can help them.

Precap : Roo and Sahil reaches the village to finally solve the mystery. Preeta tries to harm Shrishti through poison in food. New entry

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