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SwaSan TS …. Ginnie & Sanskuu …. Part 1 {by Kakali}

Hiloooooo EV1… i know m supposed to not to b here.. but being a shameless n shy SWASAN fan i can’t resist myself from coming to this site or writing on SWASAN.. what to do they r my habit… n now u all bear me again with this TS..?

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Note- I m extremely sorry for making u all people cry with my previous works.. but this one is not like d other ones.. so don’t worry.. no need of wasting tissue n fav hanky.. i almost become a rodeside appolo patient giving u all my fav hanky..

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No more patar patar ,,,Now let’s move inside d story – “Ginnie n Sanskuu”..?

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BG Music from d film “Om Shanti Om”…

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( Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Dil Ko Banade Jo Patang Saa Se
Yeh Teri Woh Haawaien Hai )…

A huge shop is shown which is beautifully decorated .may b today is something special… There we can see a couple sitting beside EO ,starting n feeding Panipuri to EO.. seems they r too busy to notice that m peeping through d window …

The boy is lovingly looking at her n feeding Panipuri… one after another.. one more..one moree … n one more… d girl is just gulping without even a break…

(monologue)-“Awww Kavita. U look soo cute when u eat Panipuri closing ur eyes.. but plz at least look at me once,feed me also.. from last 50 minutes m feeding u only.. i want to taste it”.. thinks d boy gulping down his own saliva…(*yh yh that’s our lovely Kavita only.. huh feeling kinda blasting a Panipuri bomb in her mouth?)

This time d girl takes a Panipuri n keeps it near his mouth indicating to open it … he smiles widely n about to do so but “Splashhhhhhhhh”…..

“Panipuri,Panipuri,Panipuri water…” Screams d boy waking up from his dream…He immediately touches his face n licks d water confirming is it Panipuri water or not…

At d next moment his expression changed into ? Yuckky one n says irritatingly “Mom what is this? .. how could u throw Detergent water on me.¿..it’s… it’s smelling yuck….” after a second bubbles starts to come out from his mouth ?….

The lady who was glaring d boy keeps d balty on floor n says “Kitna soyega Nalayak..kuch kam wam bhi kar liya kar..din bhar ghar me betha makkhi marta rehta hai… aur makkhi na mile toh Sapne dekhta rahta hai.. kab sudhrega tu”..?{How much will u sleep u jobless boy.. try to do some work .. all d day just sitting at home n beating mosquitoes or day dreaming.. when will u come to path?}….

D boy makes faces n gets up from his bed in one jump …. “Mom,calm down .. calm down.. morning morning don’t strat ur shout session(Wiping his face)… n waise bhi Sanskar Bhalla doesn’t need ro work .. he is a Prince” …says Sanskar kissing her left cheek..(*yoo yooo that’s our Prince Sanskar n his mom Sujhata only)…

Sujhata is hardly making herself calm but hearing his useless talks , she takes a broom(*imagining Mirna) n stars to beat him….

Sanskar who was again day dreaming keeping a wide smile in standing posture comes to sense n runs to washroom blabbering”Now a days we need to pay tex for day dreaming even.huh… ruthless people..”(stamping his feet)…

Watching her son’s antics Sujhata murmurs “Kuch nehi ho sakta is nalayak bakre ka”(Nothing can happen to this jobless goat)…

Sanskar shouts from washroom “Mom plzz make my breakfast ready, i need to go for interview”….

“Haa haaaa..(keeping d BF on dinning table). tu toh baas (realise something) interview.. what ? When..?” Asks Sujhata with twinkling eyes..

“Haa mom interview(coming out of washroom).hope toady everything goes well”…

“Don’t worry Sanskar, everything will b all rit.. u just give ur best”(feeding him dahi chinni)(*huh if my mom had ever feed me a big bowl of sweet yogurt, i could have brought much good result than this… ?)

“I know i know, n waise bhi Sanskar ko mana karna mushkil hii nahi, namumkim hai?”(saying NO to Sanskar,it’s not only difficult but also yumpossiable).. so u just take a chill pill mom”… Sanskar winks peaking her left cheek n runs from there…

Sujhata keeps gazing him n slaps her forehead..”Kuch nehi ho sakta is nalayak bakre ka”(nothing can happen to this jobless goat)..

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Evening,,,

Sanskar is coming home,his mood is off coz he was not selected for d job n is cursing that manager saying to let land sliding gulp him alive…

Meantime his gaze falls on a girl who is going through d same road he is going. .. he is soo lost in that girl {BG Music “Tumne mari entry yar,dil mei bazi ghanti yaar.. teen teen tennn”?}..

He is looking at her being lost but comes to sense hearing her giggling sound n finds himself lying on muddy water near d nalla/gutter…?

He looks at himself n that girl.. again looks at himself n then d girl who has gone soo far giving him ?yucky looks… “Yuckkk,, morning mom made me bath with detergent water n now this gutter ka water.. chiii(smeels) ..today my FATE is at strike huh”.. murmurs Sanskar giving himself a disgusting look…

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Next day,,,

Morning,,,

Sanskar- Don’t worry Mehta jii, i will pay d rent in these days..u just give me some time..

Mehta(angry)- How much time should i give u Sanskar.. it’s more than 2 months u have not paid d rent..now it’s enough..give my money in 3 days or leave d house..

Sanskar(tensed)- yeah Thnk u Mehta ji. I will pay my whole rent in these 3 days…. but plz don’t say about leaving this house.. it’s not only a house,but a sweet home for me & mom.. this place is very special for me..u also know that…

Mehta- okk. Lekin jaldi karna(do it fast)otherwise…

Sanskar nods n left d place…

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Afternoon,,,

“Sanskar take this money n brings some vegetables” says Sujhata handing over him a bag…

Sanskar makes faces n nods..

@ Market,,,

Sanskar is going to d market when his eyes sight catches a view which made his eyes sparkling with an unknown joy n happiness…. he goes towards that n asks d seller “Bhai sab, yeh kitne ka hai? I want to buy this ring.”…

Seller-It’s of 2000 rs…

Sanskar happily pays 2000 n comes back … suddenly he realized that his mom said him to buy vegetables n some groceries… but allas he has already wasted all d money… having no option he sits near d rock n curse himself n d ring which is still shining… “Its all bcz of this stupid ring.. God .if mom gets to know.. she will chew me alive”(images his mom in kali avtar nd a big axe in hand to chop him).. he starts to sweat n gulps down his saliva…. in all this process he is rubbing his hand n d ring continuously…

After a pause he witness a scenery which made me froze at his place….

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–:–INTRO–:–

SANSKAR BHALLA -“A 21 years old Nalayak Bakra(jobless goat) n Day Dreamer”acc to his mom…
“Prince” according to himself…
Loves to day dream.. doesn’t like to work.. want everything in a short way.. boared from his poor life… loves his mom d most.. always irritate her but he knows his world starts from his mom n ends in her only….

SUJHATA BHALLA- Mom of her Nalayak Bakra… a 43 years widow who has single handedly brought up Sanskar from last 15 years.. Wants his son to do some work n settles himself… but she is not soo lucky enough… always tries to make Sanskar understand to do work but nohooo.. still loves him d most… BOTH R WORLD FOR EO…

SWARA- ufff obviously our princess is a GINNIE here… having many shades but naughty all d time n damn shy? at some particular moment…. (*rest bio data will b disclosed soon?)

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I have TWO more Characters to introduce … but not in this part… i will add him in next part if i got good response… otherwise will meet u all in April…

To be continued…….

Hiloooo guyz!!.what u all have decided. shall i continue or end it in next part…do let me know through ur valuable comments…

Thnk u sooo much for reading…
God bless u all.. <3 <3…


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