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Ishqbaaz- the night changed our lives [Part 11] {and a shock from my side}

Bhai kuch bhi likhne ka man nahi, help karo… agar koi meri sahaita kar sake to meri wajai agla part wo post kare, mujhe neend arahi hai… nd producers remembered now that Shivaay have heart prob else they didn’t mention it after epi between 12-15. Nd Shiv rescues Ani, but Ani was hanging with a tree??? nd Shiv also got an attack???

Part 11
Scene 1
2 months leap (Neeti ka special jhatka, aur ab mai gayi apne ghar?)
Om and Ridhima is sitting at a garden on a bench.
Rid: Om, it’s full 1month since we are dating each other. Don’t you think we should talk to our families about it? I mean till when will we keep it secret that we are more than friends?
Om: Ridhima, it’s just 1 month and how can I tell them just like that? I need time.
Rid: Om, do we really have time?
Om remembers Ishana’s words. His eyes get wet. RidhiMa noticed it.
Rid: Om, why are you crying, did I say something wrong?
Om wipes his tears.
Om: where, no I am not crying. Why will I cry?
Rid: Om after few days it will be third month of our meeting, what will you gift me?
Om: well, ummm… I will recite a poem for you.
Rid: Om, are you serious? You will recite a poem for me on our third month of meeting? Learn something from Shivaay bhaiya, he is so romantic. He always gives romantic gifts to Bhabi. He cares for her so much…
Om: sympathy, it’s called sympathy. What Shivaay does for Bhabi is just sympathy nd nothing else. We all can see that she is in much pain. She is not at all happy after this marriage.
Rid: no Om, maybe she is a lil upset by the behaviour of family but She and Shivaay bhaiya are just so cute together.
Om: Ridhima, looking cute nd being happy are two different things. Maybe she is upset bcz of that but she is not happy. I knw her from a long time. I have seen that they aren’t happy with each other. They live in the same house but it seems that they are far away from each other. They live in the same room but there is a huge wall b/w them. They share the same bed but they avoid each other.
Rid: but Om, bhaiya never avoided her. He always try to be close to her. He loves her.
Om: maybe u r ri8. Shivaay loves bhabi maybe but bhabi… she never considered Shivaay as her husband. It is visible to all of us.
Rid: hm.. u r ri8 Om. I also noticed that only Shivaay bhaiya always try to be close to her but she tries best to avoid him.
Om looks on.


Scene 2 (Shivaay’s bedroom)
The sun rays are disturbing her sleep. Her face isn’t visible due to the lights She covers her eyes with her hand. Someone comes there. His face is shown. He is Shivaay.
O jaana plays…
Shivaay: she is getting disturbed.
O jaana…
He draw the curtains. She removes her hand.
O jaana…
He sits beside her nd caresses her face.
O jaana…
Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ke kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki waja
O jaana…
Music continues…
Shivaay: you look very cute while sleeping.
He smiles. She moves her head and hugs him like a teddy bear and sleeps. He moves his hand from her face.

Ishq hai ansoon, ishq hai naghma
Ishq sukoon hai, rahat hai
Ishq hai sehra, ishq hai daariya
Ishq junoon hai, zehmat hai (2x)

Scene 3 (Om’s room)
Om: you wanna change the theme of this room into pink roses? Are you mad Ridhima?
Rid: I just wanted your room to be unique before Rudy’s wedding.
Om: Ridhima, leave all this. Now let’s talk about Rudra. I still can’t believe that this month he and Saumya will complete their studies and get married next month! Like they had the most complicated love story. Now Shivaay’s love story is complicated and Rudra’s sorted.
Rid: but still they haven’t stopped fighting.
Om: yeah, they fight but they care for each other also.

Scene 4 (Kitchen)
Saumya was eating paratha and Rudra looking at her lovingly.
Ru: dil me parathe lekar chal rahe ho to Sumo ho tum.
Fitness ke mamle me 8 out of 100 ho to Sumo ho tum
Thori si moti aur thooori si overweight ho lekin usse cuteness ke sath carry karo to Sumo ho tum (galat huya to bolna ha, mujhe ye thik se yad nahi, almost 75epi purana hai)
Wah wah… wah wah…
Saumya looks at him angrily like she will eat him now.
Saums: Rudra, you are making fun of me?!!! How rude!
Ru: no, I just made a poem to praise your beauty.
Saums: this is called insult. I will not talk to you now. Go to ur Romi devi.
Ru: Sumo, I really wanted to praise you.
Saumya turns her face to side making an angry face.
Rudra makes a cry baby face but suddenly an smile appears on his face. He leaves. Saumya turns and sees Rudy gone.
Saumya: he left?? Now I will never talk to him, huh!
Suddenly something hits her. She turns and sees Rudy with guitar in his hand. Rudy plays the song “piya piya piya” and dances funnily. [If you remember the scene then imagine it.]Saumya finally laughs. Rudy smiles and runs to her but collides with something and falls.
Saumya rushes to him.
Saums: Rudra, are you alright. Did you get hurt? Why are you so careless? Can’t you see and walk?
Tears roll from her eyes. Rudra sees it.
Rudra: Sumo…

Dil vil chahat wahat plays in bg (Rumya love song)

He holds her face.
Saums: kya hai?!
He kisses her on cheek.

Dil vil chahat wahat mai
Milti hai tension full.
Acche khase bande ki
Ho jati hai batti GUL (?)

Saumya gets surprised. She looks at him. They share an eyelock.

Ishaq bisaq tumhara
Bematlab hai bilkul
Kabhi banke to dekho tum
Kisi signal ka Rahul..

Ye risk kiu mai lu bhala
Fande me kiu dalu gaala


Dil vil chahat wahat me
Hoti hai tension full
Acche khase bande ki
Hoti hai batti GUL

Ishaq bisaq tumhara
Bematlab hai bilkul
Kabhi banke to dekho tum
Kisi signal ka Rahul..

Ye risk kyun mai lu bhala
Fande me kyun dalu gala


Saums: Rudra…
She hugs him. Rudra hugs her back.
[I heard this song with great difficulty coz they hardly played it, it had more lyrics but bcz I couldn’t hear it properly till end so there are many words missing, I will give the lines, plz if anyone heard it then complete it]

Scene 5 (Om nd Ridz at a park)
Om: are you serious? You still want to change the theme? Ridhima plz jerk the topic.
Rid: ok. BTW, Om, you said that last night bhaiya and bhabi returned home late, what happened?
Om: actually Shivaay had some business dinner meeting and they wanted bhabi to go so Shivaay nd bhabi went there nd got late.
Rid: I didn’t see bhabi today, where is she?
Om: I said na that they returned late, so maybe bhabi didn’t have proper sleep so she is sleeping.
Rid: ohk.

Scene 6 (Shivaay’s bedroom)

She is still hugging him and sleeping. Then Shivaay sees the time.
Shi: oh no! It’s 10am now. She is still sleeping. Maybe she took sleeping pills. I need to wake her up.
He looks at her.
Shi: but she looks so innocent while sleeping. I don’t want to wake her up but I have to. Ok, let me try.
He touches her face.
Shiv: jaan “he slowly whispered”
She didn’t responded instead tightened her grip.
Shiv: jaan “he again whispered”
She didn’t rply. Now he shakes her slowly again no response.
Shiv: jaaaannnn!!! “He shouted loudly”
She finally moved
She: what, what happened? What happened Shivaay? Why are you shouting?
She realises she is hugging him. She removes her hands quickly.
She: I.. I am sorry.
Shiv: jaan, it’s 10 already.
She: what what!??? 10! Why didn’t you wake me up? “She panicked”
Shi: relax. You slept at 2am so I didn’t woke you up.

Screen freezes on his face..

Precap:who is “SHE”? Why is she unhappy. To know more stay tuned and keep commenting.

So I am v. late, or shld I say v.v.v.v.v.v. late but my schl opened. My tuitions and coaching also started and we have many functions in schl now so I couldn’t write. Thanks for the comments everyone. Please keep commenting as I am very upset that on my TS I got good response but in this ff which is my first IB ff, I got less response. Looks like I have to decide if I shld continue it or not.

Lyrics which is incomplete:
Apne upar itna…. tum
Pachtayo ge jab
Mai ho jayungi goom.

Arre pechtane walo me
hum hote nahi sumar
Lagi huye hai dekho
Hottie naughty ki katha

Saho se ur jayengi
Ek din jab har bulbul
… baja ke mujhko
…… GUL

Ok bye now. See you all later. I hope everybody knws that GK said abt Omkara’s fans. Shivika dreams, take care- Neeti

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