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UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-10)

Hi guys…sorry for being late… I was busy with my cousins… Aur fir di ki ring ceremony…us ke baad author recognition competition… Thodi busy hun lekin fir bi post kar rahin hun… Lekin mai bohot bohot happy hun… Yaar I completed 10 parts… It’s just like a dream come true for me… It’s was just possible only because of ur cmmnts… I m really really thankful to u all…Pls do keep showering ur love in the same way… Aaj ek aur request hai ki plz plz all of u do cmmnt…I want to see how much my ff entertains u all.. ( haan jise entertain nahi karthi unse maafi)…ab thank u section tho baaki hai..so lets start…
Franciee, rashiverma2199, srija, sidvee, purnima.agarwal30, piya, ranabulbul(my chulbul), sayeeda, adya, sana(sanu), ramya, twinjsidmin, chandra, antra, monica, dreamer….arundhati, sidmin…

Link for my previous epi-
part-9
Recap- twinkle asking him to leave and kunj n UVs talks… Uv asking him if he loves twinkle…

Aaj ke epi ke liye sab wait kar rahe the lekin mai fir bi late hun sorry…

Now lets begin…

Uv is smiling… Kunj looks at him shocked…
Uv: mujhe patha hai kunj… Mai hi tum dono ke beech aaya hun… Mera yahan se jaana hi teek rahega… I will go from here (by saying this he pull off the glucose wire which was injected to his left hand)
Ku:(caught hold of his hand) uv tu aisa kuch nahi karega… dek twinkle tujse pyaar karthi hai aur agar tujhe kuch hogaya tho wo khud ko sambhal nahi payegi… Haan mai usse pyaar kartha hun aur hamesha kartha rahunga… Tu bi usse pyaar kartha hai aur mujhe patha hai apne pyaar ko khone ke dard kaisa hotha hai (he says all this with teary eyes) aur meri khushi tho twinkle ki khushi me hai… Agar wo tere saath khush hai tho mai bi khush hun…
Uv:(smiles) Aise karne ke liye bohot himmat chahiye…
Kunj: yeh tho tune sahi kaha uv… Himmat chahye aur mujhe yeh himmat twinkle ke smile se mili hai… Aur wo smile shayad mere jaane se hi tw ko milega… Uv mujhse wada kar tu ke tu twinkle ki raksha (protect) karega aur use kuch nahi hoga… Promise me…
Uv: I promise u kunj mai twinkle ko kabhi dukh nahi pahun chayunga aur use hamesha khush rakhunga…
Kunj:(smiles) chal mai chaltha hun… Hope we meet again

Saying this he hugs him. He leaves from there…

While coming he sees twinkle and stands there looking at her… He looks at her lovingly… twinkle two looks at him… They share a painful eyelock…

Twinkle:(thinks) mujhe patha hai Kunj tumhari galthi nahi thi infact tum tho mujhe protect karne aaye the.. I m sorry kunj for hurting u lekin iski bhi ek wajah hai… Tumhara yahan se jaana hi teek rahega…

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Kunj: (thinks) twinkle ekbaar plz mujhe rok lo… Sirf keh do uske baad mai khushi khushi tumhe chod ke chala jaaunga..plz twinkle…haaan nahi rok sakthi tho ek smile hi dedo wahi kaafi hai meri puri zindagi ke liye…

But twinkle does nothing like that… Thier memories flashes infront of kunj’s eyes…

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi

(Kunj slowly takes back steps with eyes asking her to stop him)

Toh khuda se maang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi

(Twinkle turns other side and cries silently)

Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi..

(Kunj gets heart broken by seeing this)

Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

(Kunj is shown at railway station and he is wearing black shades so that no one notices his)

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat me
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili

(Kunj imagines her smile and he himself gets the smile)

Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri

(He recalls her hugging him when he says that he is her chilhood bestie)

Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

(He recalls their pillow fight and how they both fell upon each other)

Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai

(He removes his shades and wipes his tears forcefully)

Woooo…Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri

(He recalls her fulfilling her every wishes by saying ur wish my command and he cries harder when he recalls his recent sacrifice for her happiness)

Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui

(He recalls their bond * u can imagine ur any favourite scenes of twinj in tashan e ishq)

Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan
Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin

(He recalls their first meet and their childhood ,how he returns to her back)

Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
hmmm..
humdard haihmmm..
humdard haihmmm..
humdard haihmmm..
humdard hai…

(Finally cries harder and harder thinking about twinkle)

He gets a call on his phone… He receives it…

Kunj: WHAT????

Screen freezes with Kunj’s shocked face…

To be continued…

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Love u all….

TAMANNA.

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