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A very happy and pleasant morning welcomes you all… it’s a one shot story…. And

I won’t say anything more than tat… bcz I don’t want you to read this story from

my point of view.. Instead I want you to read this story and give your point of

view about this effort…. Let’s peep into our story…

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She walked on and on until her legs starts shaking…. Her eyes searches for

someone… she looked at one side where the police is investigating the

neighbours…. At other side the whole area is calm… she peeped into their flat

which is fully messed up … seeing those she remembers the incident happened at

night… tears starts flowing in her eyes…

There she saw a man lying over floor in the pool of blood… he is heavily trying to

breath….

RAMANNNNNNNNN she screamed….. and went near him…

She starts crying… and touches his forehead…. Raman slowly opened his eyes and

murmured “ISHUUUU”

Ishu: Raman… don’t close ur eyes… be in your senses…

She goes on directing him… and starts blabbering.. She s not in her senses…. Her

full concentration is on to make Raman in senses… as she is a doctor .. she knew

very well that if he becomes unconscious the situation can worsen

Being frustrated Raman shouted “ take breath first .. and you have to calm down

first before me”

Ishu then calmed herself down and looked at Raman who stood up.. but still

breathing heavily…

Ishu: inspite of this much blood loss you stood up by yourself…

Raman: oh drama queen…. I had this doubt much before.. and now its

confirmed…

Ishu: what doubt? She asked innocently…

Raman: you are a duplicate doctor right?

Ishu: what means?

Raman takes some blood from his neck and licks it… he takes some more and

feeds it to ishu…

Ishu: tomato ketchup

Raman: you don’t even know the difference bwtn kechup and blood? And

claiming yourself as doctr?

Ishu: but you were breathing with difficulty

Raman: that’s bcz I m allergic to this smell…

Saying tat he starts cleaning the ketchup

Ishu makes pout face..

Police: we want to know the incident from beginning… can u first identify them?

Raman: yeah she can identify… but often makes mistake in identifying blood…

Ishu with irritated face to police: just go and ask those idiots…

She points at one standing with exhausted reaction…

Police came near him and asks him .. but he was lost…

He looked at one direction and ran away

He came near a girl who is crying…

His POV: KHUSHI who don’t even know the spelling for cry…. Today she is crying…

first time I met her in mumbi railway station… and she was being scolded heavily

by her mother…. And she gave a whatever look… her mother starts crying in

middle of the road… those who witnessed that cries seeing her state.. but not a

single drop of tears came in kushi’s eyes…. She s crying today…

His heart starts aching… he gently pulls her into a warm hug…. And consoled her…

Inspector becomes very much irritated… he was about to shout.. but stopped by

REENA (IG)

Reena: I will investigate them…. You guyz take the culprits …

Kushi: i… i…. i… was… scareddd…. Arnavvvvv don’t leave me

She stammered

Arnav: shhh… relax…. Wat hap??? U r such a brave girl right?? And you wont

even get scared of death… then for what u r scared…

Kushi suddenly looked at Arnav as she is shocked to hear about herself from his

mouth…

Kushi then calms herself down : my mom is everything to me. .. she has struggled

a lot to bring me up… if in this incident I lost my life means… the dreams which I

dreamt of keeping my mom happy forver would have got shattered.. I cant even

imagine what will my mom do without me….

Asr consoles her .. and then they r called by IG

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Inside a room… all the four were present…except one…

Arnav: I think he is ..

Reena: i m not going to play with u all.. let him take his own time…

She said those in a taunting manner…

Reena: now narrate everything… from beginning…

Arnav: I m Arnav singh raizada… from Maharashtra… working in IT company

Raman: I am raman from Kerala… bank manager.. got transferred to mumbai

Ishu: I m ishita iyer from Tamil Nadu.. doctor ..

Kushi: I m Kushi kumara gupta from Punjab…. Searching for job

Reena: you all are living in same flat?

All nod and starts narrating…

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FLASHBACK:

1 month before…

We were from different states reach Mumbai only to accomplish our dreams…

got trapped by a fraud broker who received advance money from all for one

home…. then we confront him and left with a option to live in that home for next

6 months …..

“Please… give me 6 months time.. i will return all your money.. and you can live

peacefully where u want” said the broker in a very pleading voice…

He is not a criminal… he did those to save his son who is fighting against his life…

looking into broker’s situation.. all the 6 agreed to wait for 6 months… but they

dont have further money to search for separate home.. they all agreed to stay

together in a single flat with 6 rooms…

1 week passed … none of them have even said hi to each other… they were tooo

busy with their daily schedules.. and now they cant turn their faces as its

SUNDAY…..

A girl came outside with her night cotton chudi … and searched for something to

eat…. she gets some weird smell and ran outside to vomit….

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WHAT THE HELL IS THIS??? She asked with frustration…

All the five came outside…

“MIS.ISHITA IYER … YOU ARE NOT TOO INNOCENT TO IDENTIFY A WINE

BOTTLE…“ replied RAMAN with his usual arrogant voice….

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Ishita gritted her teeth: you r not alone in this flat… ladies also here….cant u keep

this away…

Raman smiles at her innocent statement.. which angers ishita more…

Ishu: why the hell r u smiling now??

Raman looks at one direction signaling ishu to see… ishu when look there… her

eyes were wide open… and she closed her mouth with the help of her hands…

There comes a beautiful girl with mini skirt and a sleeveless t shirt…. holding one

bottle of wine in her hand…

“WHATS THE PROBLEM HERE” she asked after taking one sip of her drink….

Raman: actually this behenji is telling tat ladies will have allergy to wine bottle…

Ishi throws a death glare to raman…

“OFCOURSE… THOUGH WE R IN MODERN CULTURE.. STILL THERE R SOME GOOD

AND WELL CULTURED GIRLZ WHO BEND DOWN SEEING WINE BOTTLE”… a voice

came taunting….

“MR.ARMAV SINGH RAIZADA.. HOLD YOUR TONGUE… WHAT DO U MEAN BY

GOOD GIRL” she shouted back..

“TAT REALLY NOT YOU MIS.KUSHI KUMARI GUPTA” taunted back armav with

smirking smile….

Ishu gets irritated and takes her ganga jal .. she starts reciting some mantras and

throws some water in her portion…

All loook at her with no expression.. and they went back to their room….

An isolated place

“EVERYTHING IS UNDER CONTROL SIR AND WE HAVE A TRUSTED PERSON ALSO”

he said with most confident

“BUT I DON’T THINK.. THAT GIRL WILL HELP US TILL END… IS SHE CAME TO KNOW

THAT WE ARE NOT ORDINARY ROBBERS… AND WE ARE USING HER TO ESTABLISH

OUR PLAN??? THEN?? WHAT WILL YOU DO BALDEV… SHE CAN BECOME A THORN

IN OUR ROUTE” asked the boss with a doubt

“BUT SIR… SHE S VERY MUCH TALENTED AND CAPABLE… EVEN IF SHE IS A GRIL…

SHE HAS DONE MANY THINGS WHICH WERE IMPOSSIBLE FOR OUR GUYZ” assured

baldev in optimistic…

Their conversation ends with a dealing of including that girl in the plan…

Baldev: ANIKKAAA,,,,

He shouted…

BALDEV… I M HERE” came anika running

Baldev: you need 5 lakhs for ur brother sahil’s operation right???

Anika nods

Baldev: here s our next project…

Anika: baldev.. one more thing.. this wil be the last project I m working.. aftr that I

wont do any robbing ….

Baldev: I know… you have already told this… no problem.. lets make plan…

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Ishita was very much frustrated with their behavior… and somehow she notices

the 5 th person who was very silent among them… but she don’t feel good about

him… she always stays away from that person.. as he looks like a womanizer

according to her…

“IF YOUR MIND TALK IS OVER… LEAVE FROM THE WAY” a rude yet soft

dominating voice came which made ishu to shake in fear…

He was too close to her when she turns… she pushes herself back at once and fell

over ground…

He forwards his hand to help her…

Ishu being scared of him stood by herself and ran away to her room…

“GET A LIFE DUDE… SHE IS SCARED OF YOU.. SO STOP WASTING YOUR TIME” said

Kushi with a teasing smile…

“STAY AWAY FROM ME AND MY ACTIVITIES…. AND ALSO I DON’T LIKE GIRLZ OF

YOUR TYPES” he replied her in extremely rude voice…

“OH COME ON… I M NOT A FACEBOOK STATUS THAT U SHOULD LIKE ME… MR.

WHATEVER?”

“ITS SHIVAY SINGH OBEROI… “ he said and went …

Kushi gave a whatever look and gets inside…

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PRESENT…

REENA: so he is shivaay singh oberoi….

Arnav: yeah..

Reena: why he s being so concerned about that girl anika? Is he also behind this??

Ishu: don’t know… but shivaay is not like that… he cant do anything like this…

All gets shocked at ishu’s support towards shivaay…

Ishu cont: I have misunderstood him… as he s from delhi…

Reena: why? Whats there with delhi?

Ishu: I have a feeling that delhi is not safe for girls…

All laugh at her foolish yet innocent reply..

Reena: then what happened???

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Kushi continued telling the story..

FLASHBACK:

THE SUNDAY THEN FULLY ENDED WITH THE WINE DRAMA…. NONE OF US

WANTED TO SEE EVEN THE FACE OF THE OTHER…

Likewise another couple of days went without even a word of conversation…

Ishita finishes her work and looks at the time … she gets tensed as its really late

today… she looks outside only to find a empty road… she starts walking… it’s a

walk able distance to her flat…

She feels as if someone is following her…

Whereas she found none behind her.. she brushed her thoughts and starts

walking…

Those who followed her revealed to be baldev…he told something in phone….

And starts following ishita

Ishu gets scared the most… she looked back again…. And found baldev starring at

her …. Baldev proceeds towards her only to get a death glare from a pair of eyes…

baldev then looked at him and returns …

Ishu gets confused and looked back only to find shivaay threatening baldev,,…

Ishu gets angry plus scared seeing shivaay….

Ishu starts walking fastly…

Both shivay and oshu reach flat

Shaivay : cant u come early to home… do u have any idea… how much unsafe is

this area?? And moreover don’t get scared seeing anyone firstly

Ishu looks at him with fire eyes: I m not scared at him.. but you

Saying that she left the place and enters her flat. Shivay leaves to her room

without any expressionm

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On the other hand:

M e ri ro oh ka parinda phadphadaye

Lekin sukoon ka jazeera mil na paaye

Ve ki karaan..

Ve ki karaan..

A voice starts singing in the middle of the road and dancing here and there…. She

was not in her senses…. She runs here and there.. all her frndz leave her and went

to their home…. At one point she feels dizzy and about to fall but a pair of hands

helped her to stand….

“KUSHI.. DAMIT… WHATS THIS? HAVE YOU LOST IT?” asked Arnav with utmost

anger…

“I DIDN’T LOOSE ANYTHING… MY PHONE… MY HANDBAG… “ she checks her

things and laughs like mad

“OMG … HOW MUCH DID U DRINK?” asked Arnav holding her from falling…

Kushi shows her fingers and starts counting… and atlast signs tat she don’t know

in a cute way which made Arnav to laugh at her….

A shadow came behind them …. And it follows them…

Suddenly a bike came fast and crashes with Arnav Kushi.. and it flew off… Arnav

was very much angry and runs behind the bike… but couldn’t catch him… he turns

to see Kushi … she starts blowing air in her hands where blood starts oozing out…

The shadow which follows them leaves as if his work is done….

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Arnav Kushi reach home…

Kushi starts troubling all with her antics…

Ishu came out closing her nose…

Raman: hello madras an.. take her to sleep

Ishu: if u don’t have manners to call someone by name.. u better not talk with

me…

Saying those she again locked herself inside the room

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Arnav Raman and Shivay were very much exhausted with Kushi’s tortures, Ishu

though don’t like Kushi.. she gets restless leaving her with those 3 men…

She came outside and grabs Kushi and went inside again which made the three to

smile broadly…

Morning… Kushi wakes up and finds herself in ishita’s room…. She gets

headache….

Ishu finds her in trouble…

Ishu: take this tablet… I will prepare something for u…

Saying that she went out….

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Kitchen:

Raman was drinking water while ishu starts preparing some juice for Kushi…

Ishu holding vessel in one hand and sugar bottle in other… asked raman to pass

water…

Raman: if u want .. take it by yourself….

Saying tat he leaves..

Ishu gets angry: yeah yeah.. you guyz have the habit of this .. I knew it early..

Raman: I guess u r talking about Cauvery issue btwn our states right?

Ishu gives a whatever look and starts her work

Raman also get angry and left the place…

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AAAAHHHHWWWWW

Kushi screamed.. all came to see her…

She holds arnaav’s collar and starts fighting with him…

Kushi: why have u killed my fish….

Then they all notice that kushi’s fish tank was broken…

Asr: hey idiot I didn’t break this….

Kushi: where s my fish

Asr: I guess.. u would have felt hungry tats y ate tat fish…. U punjabis will eat

anything nah…

Kushi kicks Arnav: you maratis never think before killing the laangue hindi…and I

m dam sure.. u would have killed my chotu….

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PRESENT

Ksuhi and Arnav starts fighting over fish issue…

Ishu with low voice: guyz… its me…. I have mistakenly broke that tank.. and to

hide that I threw fish away…

All saw her with wide mouth …

Reena: I m here asking about culprits.. and you guyz ….

All became silent..

Reena: leave those… then??

Raman: that fish and water fight was very big… and we thought not to interfere in

anyone’s matter…

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FLASHBACK

Anika: baldev .. I had prepared full proof plan… once we rob everything.. we shall

…

Baldev: wait…. This time.. after robbing we four will hide nearby one flat… and

you can leave with your cash..

Anika: something is different this time… you are asking me to rob expensive

machines from hospital… and aftr that you should I leave?

Baldev: anika… I think… you are not in need of cash right?

Anika turns to leave as she has no option…

Baldev: have you hacked that account

Anika nods in positive and gave him some details…

After anika left

Bakdev calls someone: all the equipments will be ready by evng… and I will make

sure no one came to know abt this… AND one more thing… that girl’s (KUSHI’S)

blood sample matches perfectly…

He hangs up…

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Evening: 8 o clock

Anika: baldev… here is those machines… I have robbed it without any doubt….

And the doctors will come to know abt the fake machines aftr two days.. as there

will be no use if this machines till 2 days…

Baldev gets those and leaves with his men… anika takes her cash… and leaves…

Some one calls baldev after talkig with him baldev intrusts his men

Baldev: we cant take them to our place… as there is police ride today…. Now we

have no option …

Another: yeah we have to finish those in their flat itself… but is that possible..

Baldev signals them to have confidence and walks

Baldev and his men enters the flat only to find ishu and Kushi

Baldev: those three men will come by 10.. we should make this two to stop those

men coming here… so that we can complete our work…

All the three men nods in agreement and enters the flat…

Ishu gets scared seeing them and starts stammering ..

Kushi came outside and start scolding them…

The men locks the room… and ties both the girlz…

Baldev came closer to ishu

Baldev: call those bodyguards and divert them … they should not reach here….

Ishu stammers: w..h..o… who… bodyguards…

Baldev: those who r living with u two…

Ishu: I don’t have their phone numbers….

Baldev smiles: oh my jaan.. (he touches her cheeks) they always guard you two

from us… and you r telling that you don’t have their number???

Both Kushi and ishu were shocked to the core,….

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PRESENT

Reena: do u guyz know about them before?

Arnav : no….

Raman: I don’t guard anyone…

Arnav: I used to follow Kushi as she always ends up in consuming alcohol….

Kushi: vo.. I was stressed as I don’t get job… that’s y…

Reena: and who will be guarding ishitha

“ME “ shivay came wearing his coolers ..

Reena: you??

Shivay: shivay singh oberoi… I noticed someone following ishita one day… and

from that day I used to guard her.. I didn’t think that it will be this much serious

issue…

Reena: I m not yet convinced with your answer mr.shivay singh oberoi… you

should have complained to police.. if u found that unsafe…

Shivay: yeah may be you r right… but ishu just came to Mumbai for one special

case.. so I just didn’t want her to trouble with case and all

Reena: whatever then what happened?

Shivay: they didn’t call us as they don’t have our numbers… then that baldev have

decided to take these two to some other place…

FLASHBACK:

BALDEV gets angry at them…

Ishu: what do u want??? Why r u doing these..

Kushi: shut up duffer… if u ask.. will they answer u???

Ishu cires a lil…

Kushi: for god’s sake stop crying…

Baldev: wow… chilly mix…. But feeling so sad for u dear… as u gonna sacrifice ur

life for us..

Kushi gets numb…

Ishu: what??? Are u guyz going to kill her???

Baldev came closer to ishu .. ishu closes her eyes

Baldev: not us… but you..

Ishu became still… then she gathers herself to confirm whether she heard it

correctly or not…

Baldev laughs loudly…. Only to get a tight slap from ishita… his cheeks were

burning like hell…. Kushi was surpised more than baldev…. Ishu who was crying

like a coward gave a slap to him….

Baldev gets angry suddenly he smiles and moves towards ishu

Baldev: now… I have to give a sweet punishment to you… so that u don’t do this

foolish thing again…

Saying those he pulls ishu closer… and asks for a kiss …

Ishu pushes him and stares angrily at him….

Baldev moves towards ishu….ishu gets more scared… Suddenly Kushi grabs him

and pecked him .. ishu was numb at her sudden move…. And baldev pushes Kushi

in jerk …. as his lips started oozing out.. because of wild kiss of kushi

Kushi smirks at him..

Ishu: why did u do this??

Kushi: you may not consider me as a girl… but I know you respect your culture

more than your life….

Ishu gets tears hearing her concern….

Baldev get angry and asks his men to take these two to old cottage…

But shivay came inside unaware of these drama… all get alerted and tied shivayy

too… followed by raman and Arnav…

All were very much angry…

Baldev: doctor ishitha iyer now will operate kushi… and remove her kidney…. As

Kushi did a big sin of hurting me…. She deserves a punishment….

All look at him

Baldev: operation will be done without anesthesia

All gets stunned…

Ishu: do whatever you want…. I wont do this….

Baldev: ok fine…. I wont do anything to you as we don’t have cheap doctors like

you for this illegal work…

Saying that he grabs shivay and starts beating him….

Ishu cries seeing that…

Shivay: ishita… don’t agree to this ever…. Let him do whatever he wants…

Shivay is beaten up heavily…

Kushi shouts: I m ready…

Arnav: shut up idiot… if shivay gives up…. I am and raman is there … he can beat

us too…

Ishu Kushi were shocked and hurt seeing their concern…

thereby anika came inside to ask for remaining amount and was shocked to the

core seeing the entire scene…

shivay: anikkaa..

he murmurs,,

before anyone could hear.. anika covers up and went to baldev

baldev: whats this?

Anika: what r u all dng here?

Baldev: you leave with ur money… we have to settle cores with these people…

Anika looks at shivay who is starrign at her with teary eyes….

Anika: ok then.. u settle cores.. I will wait.. I cant go ….

Being Aware of anika’s adamancy baldev signals his men to take anika to a room…

Shivay gets exhausted….

Baldve and his men leaves them for sometime…

Shivay without their knowledge tries to get inside the room…

Baldev spots him… he excuses himself for washroom…

Inside .. shivay meets anika…

Anika: shivay pls…. don’t give lectures…. I know what I am doing… and we r not

robbing from poor people.. we r robbing from those who have much black money

Shivay pins her to wall: don’t tell me that you got inspired from shivaaji movie…

Anika: leave me shivay…. U were my friend in college tine… so u don’t have any

right more than that towards me

Shivay pushes her aside: u r thinking that they came to rob here??? See those

machines …. Equipments…. U r not this much innocent to get fooled by these

racket… and I m sure that they are using you…. No one can know that how much

you are talented in robbing… but I didn’t know it that you will make that as your

profession.. if I would have got to know abt this.. I would never made u to even

rob for fun…..

Anika gets tears….

Shivay cont: you have fallen so low anika… if anyone here gets hurt… u will be one

of the reasons…

Baldev finds them talking… he drags shivay and starts beating him again… he

turns to anika for explanation…

Anika: don’t u dare to show ur eyes to me baldev.. you know how much I m

honest to you… and this man…. Was trying to ask for my help….

Shivay looks at anika In disbelief… anika looks away…

Anika: baldev… sahil is waiting for me… he called me… I should leave now…. Give

me my remaining cash…

Baldev who wants anika to leave.. gave the cash without any gap

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Baldev is really tired now… he became very much angry at ishita as she didn’t

agree to operate….

Baldev receives a call

Caller: I told you… I told you already not to make this cheap step… if this doctor

ishita denies… u will get punished…

Baldev: boss… our doctor only recommended this ishita… he told that she is very

scared person… will agree at once if we torture her… and we have no option other

than her…

He hangs up….

Baldev came and takes a knife and proceeds towards Kushi…

Baldevv: if ishita is not operating… let me do this…

Raman shouts: don’t u dare to do that mr.baldev… I will never leave you..

Baldev signals his men … they took raman inside the room.. and raman’s scream

came outise…

Baldev: ishita… if u operate… she will survive with one kidney.. or else.. she will

die.. now its upon u….

Arnav starts shouting… shivay tries to move and kick baldev… all goes in vain…

Ishu was forced to do the operation….. ishu takes the equipment… with eyes full

of tears she forwards …..

Within a second…. 4 gun shots…. 3 at wall one at baldev’s legs.. everyone closes

their ears and bends down….

Baldev grabbed ishu and kept gun at her neck… and threatens the cops who have

came to arrest them…

Cops starts following baldev.. where he escapes with ishu… and in mid of road

ishu bites his hand and jumps from the car….

She walked on and on until her legs start shaking…. .

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Flashback ends

PRESENT

Reena: who have called the cops?

Shivay: its anika,,…

Reena: but she is also among them…

Shivay: she have helped you guyz to catch these culprits… and I hope u wont take

actions against her…

Reena: crime s a crime.. wether it is small or large… everyone should get paid off..

Saying so reena left ….

Ishu helps raman to walk.. and Kushi helps Arnav… shivay runs to see anika… they

are not lovers…. They r not even best friends…. But a relationship is exist betwn

them.. a pure relationship…. Their respect grew up in each other’s heart….

They might be from different states… but when someone falls into a problem…

none of us can sit and watch.. we are humans… and has humanity….

A society, too, cannot do without unity. Man is a social animal. He helps others,

and others help him in turn. He has to depend upon his friends and neighbours. If

they are united, the society will be strong.

I hope you like my story… its not a love stry… its not a revenge story… its not even

friendship story…. Just tried to give a moral that unity is strength

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