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build your own story | my incomplete love story

She walked on and on until she reached the gates of the gaint house…The house seemed haunted.

Swara’s pov

I don’t know why but I had a strong feeling to enter the house..I know it would be dangerous but still I was tempted to enter the house…The door was opening automatically….everything seemed magical….I climbed the steps…what I am doing here in this lonely house….i think so its lonely….but I gota kind of creepy feeling….There were many photo frames hanging in the wall…but I could not see the pictures clearly….they seemed like they were some 2000 years old…I felt like I am being dragged to somewhere….I went upstairs entered a room….though the room was old and ragged still it had some beauty…a cot with a bed…some photo frames hanging in the wall…an old trunk….i just opened it….there were some robes even though it had dust…it seemed royal may be of a princess….i was continuously examining the room….i don’t know why but I had a feeling of being in that room before itself….when I touched those dresses they seemed very close to me….i closed my eyes i can see a glimpse of a girl dancing in that dress…but her face is not visible to me….then I got up and went to a table nearby it had a book…I opened it….began to read…”My incomplete love story”…..

I am the only princess of this kingdom Rajpura……Shekhar Gadodia,my father…kindest yet powerful ruler of this kingdom….Sumi Gadodia…my mom….sweetest women in this world….i had everything…my parents pampered me a lot….i was the happiest person in this entire world….till one day…the day which changed my life….

My father taught me everything….horse riding,sword, fight,dance,music….he raised me bravely…For him both girls and boys are equal…and he asked me to fight every situation with courage…..One day as I was practicing my sword fight…a masked person came and began to fight with me….i too began fighting back….i am an expert in this art…no one can beat me….but this person….he appreared from nowhere….fighting with me….it was really hard to fight against him….i was quite surprised….i wanted to see his face,I began to fight with more determination.At last you know what,I was defeated.I was too shocked and surprised.It is the first time someone has defeated me in a sword fight.My father came there at that time.”Sanskar Khurana….”my father called out.He removed the cloth which masked his face.A man with an innocent smile,my heart skipped a beat seeing him…He went to my father took his blessings…I was confused…”who is he….”

My father came near me”Shona…this is Sanskar Khurana..prince of pritampur,my friend’s son…”Eventhough I fell for him I gave a stern look at him..”Sire,ur daughter is such a great sword fighter….it was too difficult for me,she gave a tough competition”saying this he left with my father.I was continuosusly staring at him,he turned back and smiled at me..I felt a current passing in my body…Since he was staying in our kingdom for somedays we both used to meet coincidently..we hardly spoke to each other…we will just have horse riding,sword fighting competition between us.At first I lost to him in every game,as I began to practice more I was able to defeat him.Unknowing we both fell for each other..One day…”Shona,I want to tell you something…the day when I saw you first…I fell for you…I like your bravery,your kindness,your care…swara will you please marry me??”

I felt very happy and readily accepted his proposal,we both began to love each other very much,he asked for my hands to my father,my father too accepted his proposal,both the families were very happy with this relation,our marriage was fixed,the whole kingdom was celebrating for our marriage…These happiness,joyful moments…everything came to an end one day……Vikram…our neighbouring kingdom prince…who was forcing my father to marry me…was not happy with Laksh…he kidnapped me one day….everyone panicked as I was missing…everyone searched for me….Sanskar found my location an came to my rescue…I had the strength to fight with Vikram alone…as my father raised me differently not like every other girl…since I was in a state of dizziness I was not able to fight with him…Sanskar fought with him and defeated him…..He came to me…I was still in a state of dizziness..”Shona are you ok??” I was shocked to see something happening behind him….my vision was not that much clear,I just shouted “Sanskar……”Vikram came and was stabbing Laksh with a sword….I cant even imagine….”Vikram killed my love my life,my Sanskar…”Vikram came to me and said”No one can separate us now shona,he was about to hold me,but I took my sword,with all my anger I just killed him….I was shocked with my own actions.I remembered Sanskar and went near him…I just cried loudly”Sanskar pls don’t leave me….i cant live without you…” “Shona this is our fate,you have to accept it,I will be waiting for you in the next birth”saying this Sanskar took his last breadth…I just cried loudly….

Swara who was reading this…felt a pain in her heart…she had tears in her eyes…why I am feeling like this happened to me???….She then began to turn the next page…A picture of a beautiful girl named princess Shona Gadodia…Swara got the shock of her life…It is her own picture….She just screamed…”aahhhh……..” She woke up with a shock….

“Swara…beta what happened???had a bad dream??”…….”mom its not a bad dream but stil….”

Mom:don’t be frightened….just pray to god…have this coffee and come down fast…

Swara closed her eyes…and thought about the dream….she just relaxed….i don’t know this dream is true or not….but I have a strong feeling that I will find the true love of my life….she just smiled…and went down to continue with her routine works……………

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