This One shot would be written in Swara, Sanskaar and my POV…ð
The story opens up with a man walking down the streets, it suddenly starts raining and the man breaks down.
Tujhe Bhula Diya plays in the Background.
Naina lageeyan baarishan
Te sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina lageeyan baarishan
The man screams as loud as he could can and is getting drenched.
Rove palkein de kone vich neendh meri
Naina laggeyan baarishan
Hanju digde ne chot lage dil te
He looks down at the photos and cries.
Naina laggeyan baarishan
Rut birha de badlan di chaa gayi
Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
“Aaj Pehli baar Sanskaar har Gaya…” The man cries and is revealed to be Sanskaar.
Khoya khoya inn raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi
Har pal har lamha
A car is coming in full speed towards Sanskaar, his back is facing towards it.
Main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal har lamha
Main khudh se yeh kehta rehta hoon
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
The car, without noticing Sanskaar on the floor hits him.
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
After Sanskaar flies and falls on the floor, the car stops.
Mujhe rula diya
The song stops as Sanskaar breathes heavily. The man worries and walks up to him, Sanskaar is in pool of blood. The man takes him to the hospital in his car.
I can feel my breathing go down… everything was losing… I was losing… I was rushed to the hospital… She must be very happy after hearing this news… what else could be the great wedding gift for her? She already killed me from the inside, now my existence is also killed… I don’t think I’ll be able to survive.
Why did she do this to me? All I did is l…loved her!
“Quickly! Take him to the OT!” The doctors shouted.
I was losing my breath… I… I don’t think they will be able to save me!
“Swara….” I took her name out before being rushed to the OT.
Why did I take her name out load?
All I know is that they put injection on me and I was loosing my senses.
Swara and Sanskaar are college friends. Swara is half Bengali and Half Marwari, Sanskaar is full Marwari. One day, Sanskaar falls in love with Swara. Swara also started loving Sanskaar.
The next day Sanskaar proposed to Swara but she rejected him and went away and the day after, Sanskaar got the news of Swara’s marriage. He was heart broken.
End of Flashback.
Scene shifts to a room, a bride is shown sitting down in front of the dressing table. She seems numb and gets a phone call. She picks it up and puts it on her ears.
“Hello…” The girl says sounding unhappy.
The girl drops her phone and stands up in shock.
“Sanskaar…” The girl says sounding worried and broken.
The girls face is revealed via the mirror. She is revealed to be Swara and she breaks down on to the floor on her knees and starts crying.
Sanskaar… what happened to him?
I’m helpless, I can’t even go and meet him. Why did this happen? Why did he have to love me? I’m sorry Sanskaar… I love you but I can’t tell you I love you.
For the first time I have lost Sanskaar… Swara Gadodia has lost against her heart… chaha Ke bhi I can’t love you.
“Swara… are you ready?” My sister Ragini shouted as she knocked.
I wiped my tears and stood up. I opened the door and she was avoiding eye contacts with me.
“Ragini… what happened?” I asked her with my tears flowing out.
“Nothing…” Ragini said.
I could hear her voice cracking, she’s lying to me.
“Ragini, tell the truth…” I asked and made her look at me.
She looked up at me and had tears in her eyes.
“Ragini…” I said and she hugged me and bursted into tears.
“What happened? Why are you crying?” I asked while stroking her back.
“Swara… even your crying.” She said while crying.
Why wouldn’t I be crying? After all I’m broken from the inside…
“You tell me why you’re crying…” I asked while controlling my tears.
Ragini broke the hug and locked the door. She told me something which was shocking. I couldn’t believe that.
“Swara… this is the truth. Even I didn’t know and I found out today…” Ragini cried and fell on to the floor.
My tears started flowing out too.
“Ragini… you said you loved Sanskaar…” I said as I also sat on the floor opposite her.
“Haa Swara Lekin Lakshya lied to me that his name was Sanskaar…” Ragini said while crying.
I was shocked, I rejected Sanskaar because my sister told me she loved Sanskaar…
I remember when I was getting ready to meet Sanskaar, Ragini came in to my room. She told me she loves a guy called Sanskaar. I asked for his surname and she responded with Maheshwari which shocked me.
I sacrificed my love for my sister, I rejected Sanskaar and now I find out that the boy Ragini loves isn’t even Sanskaar, it’s his younger brother Lakshya!
“Now what will happen Swara… you and Lakshya are getting married…” Ragini cried.
Yes, today I was getting married to Lakshya, Sanskaar’s younger brother. I knew something was fishy, the way Lakshya behaved around me was fishy. He never loved me. But he himself said he loved Swara, then…
“Ragini, why did Lakshya say he loved Swara when he loves you?” I asked to clear my confusion.
“Because I lied my name was Swara.” Ragini said and looked at me.
What have these two done! They were about to ruin 4 lives. It good Ragini told me before I went to the Mandap.
“I don’t want to ruin this for you Swara… I’m sorry…” Ragini says and wipes her tears.
This Pagli thinks I love Lakshya but I don’t.
“Ragini… you didn’t ruin it from me, in fact you did the right thing by telling me… I don’t love Lakshya, I love… I love Sanskaar.” I said while wiping my tears and proudly smiled.
Ragini looked at me.
“Swara…” Ragini said and hugged me.
I was confused.
“Swara… your the worlds best sister anyone could ever have.” Ragini said and hugged me tight.
After all I am, how can I ever let anything bad happen to her.
“You sacrificed your happiness, your love just for me…?” Ragini says and breaks the hug.
I simply smiled at her.
“Always remember Ragini, you’re my sister, how can I let anything bad happen to you?” I said.
We both smiled at each other.
“Achcha, enough of emotional drama and get changed.” I said and stood up.
“Get changed?” Ragini said in a confused tone.
“Haa, you love Lakshya and he loves you right?” I asked to be sure.
Ragini nodded yes and I smiled.
“Then how can I sit in your place at the Mandap?” I said and made her stand.
“But Swara… what will other say?” Ragini said while holding my hand.
“Leave that on me, now let’s get changed.” I said pushing Ragini to the bathroom.
After a while, Ragini came out in the brides attire. She was looking the best. Hay, hope meri Hi nazar Na lag jaye.
My sisters getting married, oh god!! I was getting emotional. But she was looking the best in that attire.
“Kya hua?” Ragini asked worriedly.
“You look beautiful.” I complimented.
She gave a faint smile. I walked up to her and handed her a letter.
“When you go down, give this to Daadi.” I said as I pulled her ghunghat down.
“Are you sure Swara?” Ragini asked.
“Haa, ab Jao and remember, give this letter to Daadi only.” I said and pushed her out of the room. She walked out but was joined by some girls.
I smiled and peeked out, Ragini went down and gave the letter to Daadi and sat on the Mandap. Daadi read it and was shocked. She passed it on to Durga Uncle. Oh no! Durga uncle read it and showed it to Annapurna Aunty, she saw it and then Maa and Papa. I better leave before someone comes up.
I wore a blue anarkali suit and climbed out of the window. I’m an expert at this. After all I’m Swara Gadodia. Bas afsoos is that I missed to see Ragini and Lakshya’s marriage. I took an auto and headed to the hospital… to my Sanskaar.
I was hoping he could forgive me and I hope he’s better.
After a while, I slowly opened my eyes. I guess I survived. But now I need to move on. I guess Swara and Lakshya must be married by now.
I heard a knock on the door and saw the doctor enter.
“How are you feeling?” He asked me.
“I’m feeling… okay.” I lied.
I’m feeling depressed, heartbroken, devastated, rejected.
The doctor left after taking some notes. When would I be discharged and why did I survive?!
I regret opening my eyes and breathing! What’s the point of breathing when my soul isn’t with me?! What’s the point of the heart when the dhadkan isn’t with it!
I closed my eyes and sensed Swara. She’s here, I opened my eyes and looked at the door.
Swara? But what would she be doing here? I saw her entering in a blue anarkali suit with tears in her eyes.
I quickly glanced at her forehead and neck. She didn’t have sindoor or mangalsutra on her body. This means she didn’t get married. She slowly walked up to me and sat besides me.
“Mujhe Maaf Kar Do Sanskaar…” She said as she held my hand.
I didn’t know how to react to that. She apologised…
“I know you must be hating me for rejecting you but what else could’ve I done? My sister said she loved you, I couldn’t be selfish and hurt her…” Swara clarified.
Her sister loved me? Ragini loved me?
“But she loved Lakshya…” I said and managed to speak.
“She does but they made a big blunder… they used our names…” Swara said.
I was confused, she noticed I was confused.
“Ragini told Lakshya that her name was Swara and Lakshya told Ragini his name was Sanskaar. That’s where the confusion created.” Swara explained.
Now I get it, that’s why Swara didn’t accept my love but does she…
“So you rejected me assuming Ragini loved me?” I said and I guess I sounded serious.
Swara nodded yes, well I get her, if Lakshya told me he loved Swara then I would’ve Sacrificed her for him.
I tried sitting up but Swara stopped me.
“Sanskaar, you need rest…” Swara said sounding worried.
Four days have passed like this and finally I was discharged. Swara still hadn’t said if she loved me or not but she took good care of me. Ragini and Lakshya got married and went to Austria for their honeymoon.
Swara came inside with the bag and looked at me.
“Offo Sanskaar, you still haven for up the bed?” Swara said sounding frustrated.
I actually like annoying her.
I stood up and she gave me my clothes. I took them and placed them down. She turned to leave but I held her hand and pulled her towards me.
She was shocked.
“Sanskaar… someone will come!” She said sounding worried.
She didn’t push me… so she’s okay with it.
“No one will come.” I said and pulled her more closer by the waist.
We shared an eye-lock, Swara was looking so innocent. Her big brown eyes are driving me crazy. I leaned in to kiss her but got interrupted.
“Ahem ahem!” Badimaa fake coughed.
Me and Swara parted and composed ourselves.
“Vo Aunty… I…” Swara was struggling to say and looked at me.
“Badimaa… I’ll go and get changed.” I said and saved myself.
Swara was glaring at me and I smiled and left with my clothes.
I could hear Badimaa and Swara talk.
“Swara… do you like Sanskaar?” Badimaa asked.
I wonder what her answer was, ugh, I hope I don’t miss it. I finally put my jeans on and opened the door. It was too late, they were gone!
Why? Why does this happen to me? I shook my head and put my shoes on.
“Sanskaar…” I heard Badimaa say.
“Ji Badimaa?” I said as I looked up.
“Beta, do you like Swara?” Badimaa asked me.
Without thinking, I shook my head positively. She simply smiled and left.
After a while, I reached Maheshwari Mansion with Badimaa and Swara. Mom was thanking her for taking care of me and wouldn’t let her go without eating. No matter how hard Swara tries, she can never win against Mom.
Bade Papa was looking at her, I wonder what it was. I finished eating and so did Swara.
“Swara, take Sanskaar to his room.” Mom said.
Swara had no choice but to nod okay. I smirked. She stood up and started walking with me to my room.
We finally reached his room. It was awkward. He wasn’t talking and neither was I…
“Thank you” He said as I opened the door.
I nodded and turned to leave but he held my hand and stopped me. My heart was beating fast. He then pulled me inside the room and pinned me to the wall behind one of the door. Both of us shared an eye lock.
My heart was continuously beating. He came closer to me, mine and his foreheads were touching. He leaned in to kiss me and I closed my eyes. I still hadn’t said I love you to him. My breathing was getting heavier.
“Swara…” He whispered.
“Haa Ram, how about Tomorrow?” We heard Durga uncle say.
He was coming this way, me and Sanskaar composed each other and I headed out feeling shy. After I left, Durga uncle and Ram uncle entered the room.
I went home and entered my bedroom. Well after the hospital, I entered my house, no one was angry at me, everyone seemed okay with my decision of not marrying Lakshya. Even the badi people, surprisingly.
“Swara, tomorrow it’s your wedding and be prepared.” Daadi said.
I was shocked, I was getting married and I didn’t even know? But to who?
“To who?” I asked Daadi.
“Sanskaar, Durga Ji phoned today and asked for your rishta and we decided to get you married off tomorrow.” Maa said as she came inside the room.
I was surprised but happy at the same time.
Finally, my wait was over. It was my wedding day with Sanskaar. I need to say that I love him today under any circumstances.
I was getting ready.
“The baraat have arrived.” One of the girls shouted.
I was nervous, shy and happy. After a while, Daadi came to get me. This was happening to fast… today I was going to be Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari. I was happy but nervous. I had a mixed emotion.
I sat down at the Mandap and smiled at Sanskaar. After all the rituals, he put sindoor in my maang and put mangalsutra around my neck.
I was officially Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari.
At my Bidaai, Baba cried the most. I will miss Maa Baba and Daadi. I sat inside the car and wiped my tears.
After a while we reached Maheshwari Mansion. I was at the doorstep. After all the rituals, Uttra wouldn’t let us come inside.
“No Bhai… you have to! Lakshya Bhai done it!” Uttra said.
I was confused. Sanskaar nodded okay and picked me up in his arms. I was shocked.
He then started walking upstairs with me, I smiled.
“Sanskaar…” I said.
“Hmm…” He said and looked at me.
I was hearing my confidence.
“I…I love you.” I finally said.
I said it, at last. He looked at me and simply smiled. Isn’t he too happy?
“I already knew that.” Sanskaar said.
How? I thought.
“Ragini told me and the way you cared for me was evident…” He said as he placed me down on the bed.
He was looking at me with love, I know how happy he must be after marrying me.
I hugged him and he hugged me back. After a while, I looked at him.
“Thank you for coming into my life.” I said and pecked his lips.
He pulled me closer and made that a long and passionate kiss. He then started kissing my neck after removing my jewelries. I moaned and clutched on the bed sheets.
He then made me lie down and he was on top of me. He started kissing me.
Then slowly we consummated our marriage and became one.
We became SwaSan, after all.
End itni Jaldi Nahi ð
Meri POV Ki Baari…
Swara and Sanskaar loved each other. They were the example of true love. They story took a 6 year leap.
Swara is shown arranging the clothes.
“Mamma!” New voices are heard.
Swara look there and sees her 5 year old son, Saiyyam and her 6 year old daughter, Saanvi.
“What happened?” Swara asked.
“Mamma, Papa isn’t sharing the pasta.” Saanvi said.
“Sanskaar?” Swara asked.
Saiyyam and Saanvi nodded yes.
Swara moves forward.
“No Swara, you won’t move out of this room.” Sanskaars voice is heard as he enters from the entrance.
“What am I hearing Sanskaar? You’re becoming a child like them.” Swara complains.
“Swara, you should be taking rest. You’re 8 months pregnant.” Sanskaar says and makes her sit down.
She looks at him.
“I was hungry.” Sanskaar justifies.
“So were we, Mamma, we even begged him but he didn’t care.” Saiyyam said.
Sanskaar looked at both of them.
“Achcha Bachchu… you’re trying to cause fight between your mamma and papa? You two ate the apple pie without me!” Sanskaar says.
“Unbelievable, you three are fighting over food?” Swara says.
Sanskaar, Saiyyam and Saanvi look at each other and laugh.
Saiyyam and Saanvi walk up to SwaSan and they hug Swara.
“Sorry Mamma… look, you took a leave from the kitchen for 2 months and this is what happened.” Saanvi says.
Sanskaar also joins the hug. Swara smiles.
After a while, Saiyyam and Saanvi leave. Swara stands up and so does Sanskaar. Sanskaar pecks her forehead and they share a hug. Swara rests her head on Sanskaars chest while his hands are wrapped around her body.
“My wife’s going fat…” Sanskaar jokes.
Swara slaps him on the arm playfully.
“Haww, you’re so mean!” Swara says feeling upset.
“I’m only joking.” Sanskaar says.
Swara smiles but acts being upset. Sanskaar keeps on apologising to her. He even sits on his knees. Swara smiles and nods okay.
1 MONTH LATER:
Swara is deleviring in the hospital. Sanskaar is standing outside worriedly.
After a while, he hears babies cry. The doctor comes out and congrats him.
“Congrats, you have two twin boys.” The doctor says and leaves.
Sanskaar goes in and smiles. He gets happy and looks at his sons. He then sits besides Swara and she simply smiles at him.
They join their heads together.
“I love you Swara.” Sanskaar says while holding her hand and joining his forehead with hers.
“I love you too Sanskaar.” Swara says and smiles.
The moon is then shown and a star twinkles.
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