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Shraman OS: A wrong Whatsapp message

Hey guys, I am back with a new OS. And probably the last one. Sorry for that but after this I wont be able to write any because I am going out for vacations so it will not be possible. If I get time I will try to be back.
So lets start with ‘A wrong Whatsapp message’. This idea struck in my mind when my friend sent a message, to the right person but that incident gave me the idea of a wrong Whatsapp message. So lets begin,

Suman pov: I guess I am in love with him… and I feel I cant even live without him, I will have to send a break up message to him. She remembers,


A big college is shown and there is a huzzle buzzle all around.this was the first day of the college, and all new students were searching for their classes. A girl is shown wearing baby pink top with black jeans, who is searching for her class, as she is walking she clashes with a boy rather a senior who was going towards his class. He holds her by her waist. He gets lost in her eyes, her brown eyes, baby pink cheeks. He keeps staring at her. While the girls eyes are closed in fear. She feels his touch and thinks that he is her soulmate, donno why but she felt very nice being with him. She heard a voice from back,
Are sumo…

Yes she is none other than Suman Tiwari.

She comes back to her senses and opens her eyes, but to her surprise after helping her the boy had vanished. She wondered who was he!

Preeti(her best friend): Are sumo.. where have you lost? In whose thoughts? Koi handsome banda mila kya? (you found any handsome boy here?)

Suman: oye chup kar (oh shut up!)

They search for their class and finally they found their class. They all were very excited as it was their first day, not only because of studies but because they will get to make new friends and enjoy college life. Everyone was busy making new friends but Suman, she was just lost in that boy’s thoughts!

Preeti: what happened yaar Sumo? Why are you so lost?
Sumo: No..nothing…
Few days pass by and that boy used to come to see her daily, he had found her class and so he daily used to come to see her. He had fallen in love with her, only confession was remaining. He used to smile seeing her smile and so on…

One day,
A boy came to Suman,
Boy: Suman, I want to say something.
Sumo: Ha Rahul bol! (yes Rahul say!)
Rahul: actually its like… I like you. Will you be my gf?
(Rahul was a boy in Suman’s class, they used to talk with each other frequently, but Rahul had started liking her from the first day itself.)
Sumo: What?? Really?? She thinks for a while and says yes!

(Suman didn’t like him but she wanted her to have a bf! All her friends were having one but she was the only girl with none, so she accepted the proposal only because she didn’t want to be lonely and different from her friends. She proudly wanted to say her friends that she also has a boyfriend.)
Rahul: Thank you so much Suman.. and he forwards to hug her but she refuses.
As she didn’t want to get so close with him.
Days passed by and they used to spend time with each other. She started liking him as a friend but as a boyfriend!
That boy who had saved Suman used to feel jealous seeing their closeness. Everyday when he used to come back home he used to break things of his room to take out his anger. One day he decided to become friends with her and then propose her.

Few days later,
When Rahul was absent, and Suman was alone in the canteen, that boy comes towards her and unfortunately they both clash. The boy hadn’t expected that! Suman, who was carrying coffee in her hand became very angry on that boy because the coffee had fallen on her.
Suman: Don’t you have eyes or what? You idiot boy!
The boy did not want to fight with her lady love and so he just silently listened her. A while later Suman realises that all this while she had been talking alone and the boy didn’t even say a word. And all the students in the canteen were staring at her. She feels embarrassed and leaves from there. That boy felt very upset.
After 2-3 days that boy goes to Suman,
Boy: Hey
Suman: you!!
Boy: I am sorry for what happened in the canteen that day.
Suman: hmm.. its ok!
Boy: so friends?
Suman: I don’t even know your name and friends?
Boy: My name is Shravan Malhotra!
Suman: I am Suman Tiwari, and they both shake hands. They talk for some time about studies. This way they started meeting every day. Suman never told him about Rahul, she met Shravan without informing Rahul. She felt a connection with Shravan. They started getting very close day by day. Suman started loving Shravan and slowly stopped spending time with Rahul.
One day,
Shravan confessed his love to Suman. Suman didn’t realise her love for him and so she does not say anything, she just walked off. Shravan felt very bad.
That entire night Suman was thinking about Shravan and she realises that she is in love with him.

She types a message,
She sent the message and she realises that it was sent to Shravan! She wanted to send it too Rahul!
Everything was shattered for her. She cried a lot. When Shravan read it, he was also completely shattered. He cried. He realises that maybe she loves Rahul as he had seen them together many times. He cried a lot, and was in pain that his love didn’t accept him.

Next day,
Suman went to Shravan,
Suman: Shravan listen.. that message… was..
Shravan: I understand! Its ok..
Suman: listen to me that message..
Shravan: I have to attend my class, will meet you later.
Suman: Shravan… she cried but he didn’t turn.
Shravan wiped his tear after turning.
Suman also went for her class. Later when they had a break, she went to Rahul.
Suman: Rahul listen..
Rahul: Yes.. say na..
Suman: Actually I want to break up with you. I don’t love you.
Rahul: you cant! I love you more than anyone else in the world.
Suman: no Rahul.. I am sorry, she starts to leave.
Shravan hears them, he realises that the message was for Rahul. But he felt cheated as Suman never told him about Rahul. He turned to leave, but then is stopped by a noise.

Suman: Leave me Rahul..
Rahul: You are only mine…
Suman: ahh..
Shravan runs to her and saves her from Rahul. He beats him blue and black. Rahul runs away from there. Suman quickly hugs Shravan
Suman: I love you Shravan..
Shravan: I love you too Suman..
The End!

So I am done with it! I know it was very boring because I wrote it in a hurry. Sorry for wasting your time 🙁 please comment and let me know your views whether good or bad!
And I am done with my last OS. As I told you I am going out and after that my exams will begin so hardly I will get time to read other ff’s so maybe I will not comment. Bye bye I have to do packing now.. love you all…
Thank you!

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