Hey guyzzz this Liya. I thought of writing an OS about Sukor!! Hope you guyzz like itð. Vimli & Sukor have escaped from the clutches of kamal narayan and ragini.bhuvan – maayi and others helped them to escape and asked them to stay away from village for somedays as they are not safe!! Its about eveng and they are still running, they reached a place ,it was very beautiful with greenary all around! Its preety much close to a small forest with trees around and there is a lakhe to..sooraj who is exhausted tells them” ab mujhse nehi hoghaa!!! Mein zindaghi mei kabhi ,itni nehi dhaudi ”
Chakor :itni nehi dhaudi yaa kabhi nehi dhaudiðð.
Suraj glared at her . Imli: mein bhi thakh ghayi hoonð¥. Kya hum yahaan kuch samay keliye rukth sakthe hei. Vivaan : haanð. Gundose bhi peecha chudgayi.voo logh nazar nehi arrahaa…thoo hum yahaan rukthe hei.par aghee kyaâ Suraj : mera ek dosth hei.uski out houseð© yahan sei kuch door hi hei hum vahi jaate hei vimli find it to be a nice ideað .But chakor was not happy with it. She was not ready to leave the villagers and bhuvan – maayi to suffer alone. But her parents emotionally ,made her to take promise that she would stay away for few days!! Chakor determines to find some solution to save her family and villagers .She decided to comeback to village with a bang.
Vimli was sitting under the shade of the tree with imlis head placed on vivaans shoulderð. So suraj was getting bored.so he thought to check out chakorðð.chakor was standing far from vimli ,beside a lakhe.suraj moved near to her.
Chakor was lost in thought when suraj came near to her! He then started staring ððher with soo much off affectionðð!! He remberd yesturdays incident,how she broken her thumbð ,when he said her!!How she saved him ,when his father was about toð«ð«ð«shoot him.How she consoled him,when he was brokenð during vimli reunion…..he remembers each and every favour she had done for him!
Then he rembered how he tortured her,how much he insulted her and how he even used her fame to get moneyðµðµ .he always tried to crush her dreams…but still she saved him every time when he was in danger!!
He then came more closer to her and looked at her deep brown eyesð.he wanted to say sorry to her! He saw her broken thumb ,with a heavy heart ððhe touched her thumbðð
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!! Chakor screamed in pain! Now chakor was fuming in anger and suraj was like ab tho mera murder hoghaðð.
Chakor : tumhara problem kya heiððdimagh kaarabh hoghaya hei kyaaâ
Suraj was saying Sss…Ooo..Rrr…but before he could complete she started ” vaise bhi khaarabh hone keliye ,tumhare pass dimagh kahaan heið saari planning tho hamesha mujhe hii karne padthe hei” she said proudlyððð. And he was numb!
Suraj after gaining his sense shot at her “auuy madam tumhe thoo mujhe thankyou karne chahiyeðð
Chakor : Thankyouð±ð±ð±ð± voo bhi tujheeðððshe was controlling her laughter.
Suraj : mein ne Teri motti behen ko apne upar rakha heiðð
Chakor : tumne imli ko motti kaha ððð…nehi chodunghi tujee!!
Suraj : ohh meri maaððð …rukhh…then suraj came near to her ,he put his arms over her shoulder and was acting like thinking!!!
Chakor : kyaa sochh rahe hauââhe asked him innocentlyð ð
Suraj looking at her from top to bottom and then looking at imli who is with vivaans from top to bottom said “sorry yaarðð mujhe bohot baadii ghalthi hoghayiðð Tumhe teekse dekhne me baad mujhe lagtha hei ki ,imli thoo slim beauty heiððð”
Chakor : haan merit been SLI….chakor then realized what he meant and then stared @suraj and yelled SURAJ….ðððððððððð
suraj smirked @her and was laughing holding his stomachððð
Chakor then picked a stick from ground seeing this suraj ran for his lifeððand chakor was chasing him!!
Suraj who was running yelled ” bhagwan ki laakh laakh shukhar hei ki tum merit uppar nehi aayi bechara vivaansðððuski halath tho dekhooðð.
Chakor : Tumne mujhe motti kahaðð an thoo tum zinda nehi bachoghee!!
Suraj : meine kab kaha ð abhi toh tum kah rahe thee tum motti hauðð
Suraj said this while running just then he got a hit on his backðð
Now suraj was running and chakor was just behind him,lazy lad suraj who got tiers stopped running and immediately turned back and suddenly …….THUD!!!!!! Both was on the ground! Chakor on top of suraj…they share a beautiful but cute eyelockðð.They were lost in each otherðððð.This was their moment.Even the sun ððwas blushing seeing their closeness,so decided to get ready for his set! The wind ððwas blowing heavily showing its happiness ððbut ,due to him some of chakors hair strands coverd her face ,so suraj was not able to see chakor face properly.So he gently moved her hair ,just then his hard hand touched her soft face.Chakor was shivering and butterfliesðð were flying from her stomach but suraj was in Electric shockâ¡â¡.
They then realized their position…..
Suraj : abhi toh meine bhagwan jii she thankyou kaha tumhe mere upar na rakhne keliye ,shayyadh voo nehi sunniðð.
Chakor then showed him a pout face and playfully hit him!!
Both of them got up and then started laughing togetherððð.
Birds were flying in the sky going back to their nest,soo our Sukor also moved their way to out house….but wait where is vimliââthey are busy in romancing ð.so Sukor catch hold of the love birds and all the four birds ..continued their journey…that they have just started!!!!
—————————————————————————–I hope all of you like the OS .This is my first attempt so sorry for mistakes and typoossð ð plzz soo give suggestions to improve!
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