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5th Page Coming Soon- 0 (KRPKAB)

Hi Frndzz..I wish to say here…He means Dev n She means Sona….Intros of Dev n Sona r strting while Sona call him “Dev” n Anu call her”Mamma”…

Anu(DevShi’s child):”Mamma,Come n See what Teddie is Doing?”…

She(none other than Sona) draws a small girl’s pic(none other than their daughter Anu) on glass…in pink color …
N Kisses the glass..on its bottom …
N write ” Urs Kshi”..

Anu:”Mamma”…(from outside of the home…)

Intro of Sona:

Sona turns…with painting brush…An angel(Sona) who wears WhiteTshirt,Pinkish Frock..n Feather EarRings…n mixture of Yellow n Pink Bangles on her left hands only…..
A very small black curve on between her Two Eyebrows…

Ask:”What happen,Anu?”…
She walks towards the Front door…
She shocked…
“Dev”…

Intro of Dev:

Dev turns…(Actually he is UP..)….Sitting on the Compound wall..which is long in height..A Teddy Bear is with him…Many people r watching him..with fear…

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Sona:” What r U Doing,There?”…
Dev:”1 min,Senorita”..
..
“Dhoom machale” is going on his headphones…..
Dev:”Finished”(seeing Sona)..
Sona:”What?”..(Big Eyes)..
Dev:”Dhoom machale”(shock)..
Sona:”I ask Y U?”(in signal)..
..
Dev:”Waiting for a Frnd”…
Sona:”Who?1st,U come from there”..
..
Dev:”KaKa….”…(surprisingly seeing something)
A Crow comes…..
Anu laughs…
Anu:”Mamma..My Frnd comes..”..
Dev:”My Angel says her Frnd didn’t come earlier Today..So I was waiting for her Frnd”…
Sona (sees fake angry)Dev n Anu …

The crow is sitting on Dev’s right hand..n waves its wings..
The people(fear):”Sir..Bhaiya..Be careful”…
Dev jumps from the top of the wall..with crow n The Teddie…

Dev-in Red TSh,Jean Trousers,Long Hair,French beard….with a smile..
Anu n Sona(shock)..Their hands on their lips expressed their shock…

His first step on the surface…His watch rings…The Time shown on the watch is 12:34..
Dev sees the time n runs towards his room…
He opens a diary n write “I m still searching 5 th page..”….
N see his locket….4pages r present in it..
” Teddy…””Dev”…Sound comes from out….

Dev sees the 4th page…
In it the word “UrSuspense”….
Dev(thinks):”U make Surprise for Dev?”(smiles)………n said “Coming,Angel”…

The Suspense,The 5th page,The page’s original Loc,Role of 5pages,Dev’s Surprise..All r coming Soon…

-HarSHaN..

Tanqq Frndzz for Readingg…I hope the story is in Simple form..Kindly write ur thoughts after readingg..Hope U like tizz Frndzz…
Take care frndzz…

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