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Twinj ff – love or mistake ???? Episode 1

Hey guys …
Thnx for suggestions
@ I will give past between present …. I know many of u suggested to give past first but I was having a good idea for showing past between present so that is why I had choosen 2nd option .
@ yuvraj opposite will be mahi .. if the situation will suit I will add her sry but I can’t promise …
@ and plz try cooperate with me if will give u short updates .
@ I will concentrate on each and every charcter of ff … so the story will go slow … so plz don’t panic….
@ plz imagine sid as kunj … plz ….
@ thnx for ur comments in Proglogue …


Link of proglogue of twinj version : Click here

Link of Proglogue of swasan version : Prologue – Click here

Recap – Proglogue ; A girl confronts a boy .


♡Episode 1 ♡
The boy was sitting on bed and was crying recalling his past . His face is revealed . He is none other than kunj {many or all of u have guessed right }
Kunj {monologue}- why ???? Why have u done this with me . . Why ???? When first time I falled in love with someone u snatched it with me … why ????? I know I have done wrong with her … I should not …..
His chain of thought was disturbed by someone’s knock on the door . It was her mom usha
Usha – kunj puttar , come food is ready … ??
Kunj nods yes . Usha was about to leave when she notices tear marks on kunj’s face and his eyes which had swelled bcoz of crying .
Usha {with concern }- kunj , are u crying ???? ??
Kunj {hiding his tears and with a fake smile }- no mom , just work stress and nothing… u go na I will come down …. ??
Usha {in a little ordering tone } – ok …. freshen up fast and come down … ur papa is waiting for u …. ??

Kunj {with again a fake smile } – ok meri maan now go …. ??

Saying this kunj takes usha out of the room and closes the door from inside . Here usha is still thinking what had happened suddenly to his son . SHe goes from there with unsatisfaction.


Here the girl reaches to his house and he rings the door bell . A lady in late 50’s comes opens the door .
Lady {with little concern }- bohot jaldi aagai tu twinkle { u have came so early twinkle } ??
{ So the girl is one other then our twinkle … again most or many of u have guessed correct and the lady is twinkle ‘s ma leela }

Twinkle {with blank expression as she is still thinking about kunj } – there was much work in office …??
Leela sensed something is fishy so she asked – I am ur mum I can easily sense that something is wrong so tell me clearly where u were till now bcoz u should have returned one hour before this … ??
Listening leela’s queries about his life twinkle became furious and blurted out kunj’s anger on leela.
twinkle {with his full anger } – ma… I am not a small nursery kid …. I am big enough to take care of myself & who are u to question me … I am ur daughter not ur servant to answer ur each and every nonsense question … so never try to ask me this question again that where I were ??? I can …. ??

She was interrupted by his father’s voice .
Raman {twinkle’s father} { with same angry tone as twinkle }- PRINCESS…. how dare u to speak like this with ur mom … she is also ur mom …. not ur servant ….??
Twinkle {realized what she said to leela and asked for forgiveness} – sorry papa ….
Raman {with a little calm tone but still angry } – ok … but remember that ur mom is not at all ur servant …. she does work of the whole house but never complained … she neither asked for holiday nor a break …. I know there are servants in house to work but still she had to work … but where in house where there is no servants .. then these women work day and night for their family .. sometimes a woman had to work in home also and outside also to earn their livelihood … so now mind ur tounge … and go to ur room now .. ??

Twinkle goes from there with a guilt in her face .
Twinkle goes inside her room and closes the door and cries .
Twinkle {monologue } – why god ??? Why have u done this with .me .. this is second time when I got betrayal … I hate u MR.KUNJ SARNA … now enough … I can’t bear this pain … I want to share this pain with someone .. but with whom .. ??
Suddenly twinkle sees a diary kept on her study table . She goes near her table and sat on the chair .

Twinkle {a idea popped out in her mind }- DIARY …
{Hope u guys understood the idea }


So guys … this was the 1st episode hope u liked it … do share ur valuable comments …. and i know today chappy was boring but i want tell about mother’s importance in our life. So
… want a precap … ok ..ok… lelo …
Precap – twinkle started writing diarry {past } happy moments of papa mumma and princess ….??

Ok tata ….
Take care …
Keep smiling …

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