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Storm of the Bruised Hearts- Intro+Prologue (EDKV) [by Ariana]

Hi sweetos!!! Ariana the pagli is back with another boring piece of ff to waste ur time. So how r u all? I hope exams r over nd u guys nailed it up. I have some news for u at the end so do scrawl till the last word.

Just in case u r new to TU or never came across me then don’t worry here is a self-introductory speech
“Ladies and gentlemen welcoming myself the dumbest girl u will ever know-Ariana!! U can call me anything u like. But I am commonly known as Aru so forget ur age, elder or younger, call me tht. I’m a very nice girl and will screw u up soon so get ready. Throwing garbage at me works coz literature is my enemy nd u’ll b reading my writing in a sec !!!”


Before I jump into the intro I wanna thank u all for showing sooooo much love on my previous ff. I relly don’t knw wht to say abt it. So much love nd affection is something I’m not use to but u guys flooded my heart with butter nd love. I can’t write much abt that coz obv u guys made me SPEECHLESS so I guess let’s get started with this:

Storm of the Bruised Hearts

::Character Sketch::
(pls note the characters have two parts – 1. On present, 2. On flash backs however imagine both time period played by Namik n Nikita)

Shravan Malhotra- Male protagonist of the story. (Present) A 27 years old construction engineer who lives in Canada with his brother Pushkar. (Flashback) 22 years old handsome guy studying on the 3rd year of his university. The top student.
Pushkar Malhotra- Brother of Shravan (Present) 25 years old Business man in a relationship with Preeti Tiwari (Flashback) The most popular guy on the University. Social and friendly. A party hard type boy
Sumo: Female Protagonist (Present)__________Missing_________ (Flashback) A 20 years old bubbly girl. Best friend and classmate of Pushkar. Top doctorate student of her batch.
Preeti Tiwari: Pushkar’s girlfriend. (Not included in flashbacks)

**Certain characters will be introduced later on as the story progresses. There is NO connection between the show and my ff story line. Pls don’t interconnect the characters, u might just mislead urself**


By the end of his 3rd year of university, Shravan Malhotra started having a settled life. Days started with the cry of 90s traditional alarm and ended among the thick layers of hardcopied books. Smiles rarely made up to his face but muscles did curve everyday as his smaller soul yelled “Bhaiya” and started the regular popular dude stories. Having a loving younger brother and same routine cycle. All organized and well planned. But what he was unfamiliar to was the fact that things were to change and it won’t be according to plan this time…. Her entrance on his life was like a storm. Destroying all routines and messing up the settlements. It was a storm that brought happiness. The wind it carried was the air of love. It was a magic…it was her… Life was simple, yet perfect.
But then, when the lines of perfection came to an end, her mysterious departure left him devastated with a messed up life once gain. Following invisible traces and the interconnected heartbeats, will Shravan be able to find his love again?

::Sneak into the story::

“It has been 5 years now. Why don’t u admit it she left?” Pushkar said in a concerned voice
“She just kept her promise.” He replied coldly as usual.
“But she left! She could have returned if she felt the same…..” His words took a pause as Shravan shook the red book he was reading. “A journal doesn’t define someone’s feelings. And that was 5 years ago, she obv moved on. And even if she didn’t and due to some reason she is away from u, then how r u finding her? Do u know her name? Sumo sounds stupid. Back then even u and I, both knew it wasn’t her real name. How r u finding a nameless, trackless girl out of these 8 billion people of the world?”
He kept mum knowing each and every word of his brother had 99% possibility of becoming the truth. “Bhaiya don’t wound urself. She is never gonna…”
“She is the only one who can heal my wounds. And she will return…I’ll find her…”

That was all for the intro. I’ll be posting 1-2 epis each week on regular basis. If my life messes up like Shravan’s then I’ll let u knw nd if I can make time out of my studies, I’ll try posting 3 epis a week. I knw it’s very confusing and boring. The original story was a 254 pgs novel with romance and social conflicts which I had to write for my Canadian High School English Diploma lately last year(Yah so just in case u guys still don’t know, I live in Canada.) so I guess u guys can understand y I made the setting of the story in Canada not London or USA. Pls let me knw when will ur exam end (if it didn’t end yet) coz I don’t wanna come between ur studies so I can start the ff according to ur convenient timing.

N I have news… Today early in the morning I received a mail saying I got a one year high school scholarship due to my last year’s academic result!!! U guys might be wondering why am I bragging but trust me, I’m not. I just can’t believe it. I knw I’m a dumb girl and deserves none, not even if I claim them as “paid by hardwork” so yah it was a miracle. I wanted to start ff from Oct after all of ur exams end, but after getting this new I really needed a reason nd post something just for thanking u all coz… I realized what made me get all these was all of ur LOVE nd BLESSINGS! U guys have been supporting me soooooo well since I joined TU that I just can’t have enough words to thank u. It is sooooo sweet that u guys send me soooo many warm wishes. And look what u all did. Gave me some assets to keep till my death!!! It was YOU ALL that made me boast up my confidence. I love u all!! Thanks sound really low in front of what u guys have done for me. I don’t knw how to return the favour, but I’ll try my best to please u all. So just before I actually start writing it, I wanna ask, should I carry on with this ff or u guys want something different? Pls share ur point of view without any hesitation. Do share ur opinions regarding the intro.
Loads of love
Huggies nd kissies
Ariana (Aru)

PS: I am a horrible writer nd literature is not my piece of cake so don’t expect anything good from me. The only positive thing abt this ff would b Shravan being an engineer nd Suman being a doctor coz Bio n Math r my field so yah I can crack academic jokes in between! But then again, the writing would b terrible so pls pls pls consider it. ?
PPS: I don’t knw when will I start the story. It depends completely on when all of ur exams end.

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