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na jaana dil se door pt 45

Hey guys! I am sobia back with part 45…let’s start

Recap: sarya leave home and swasanraglaksahutt get shocked….sarya were waiting at the railway station and they were waiting for the train but some masked person came and took sarya away…their suitcase opened and a picture fell out of it….swasanraglaksahutt felt something strange so they told their husbands….sanskar said they will probably be at the railway station or something to leave the city….we should check there….they agree and all leave….samrat and kabir are in cahoots with dp….

3 YEARS LATER……
A BIG HOUSE IS SEEN….THE CAMERA ROLLS AND TAKES US INSIDE….WE SEE A SMALL BOY PLAYING WITH HIS CARS….HE IS LAUGHING AND ENJOYING HIS CARS…..FROM THE STAIRS TWO GIRLS COME DOWN AND SAYS AAYUSHHHH…..YES IT WAS RAGLAK’S SON WHO WAS NOW 6 YEARS OLD….AAYUSH SMILED AND SAID DIDI….HE RAN TO THEM AND HUGGED RAINA AND MAHI….RAINA SAYS AAYUSH DID YOU MESS WITH MAMA? AAYUSH CUTELY NODS NO DIDI….MAHI SAYS THEN WHY WAS BADI MA SOUNDING LIKE YOU DID SOMETHING….AAYUSH LAUGHS AND RUNS AWAY….FROM THE BACK MARA NOD THEIR HEAD IN DESBELIEF AND THEN SMILE….
RAINA AND MAHI RUN DOWNSTAIRS AND SAY AAYUSH WAIT….WHERE ARE YOU GOING? AND DID YOU HAVE FUN AT YOUR FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL TODAY? HE SAYS YES DIDI A LOT AND AAYUSH RUNS AND SAYS CATCH ME IF YOU CAN DIDI….BOTH RUN AFTER HIM WHEN SUDDENLY AAYHIRA BUMP INTO SOMEONE….ALL GET SHOCKED AND THE LADY LOOKS ON ANGRILY….AAYUSH STAMMERS AND SAYS M…MA…MAMA AAP? HE GULPS DOWN AND AAYHIRA KNOW HOW MAD RAGINI CAN GET….MARA RUN TO SAVE AAYUSH FROM RAGINI’S SCOLDINGS….RAGINI SAYS AAYUSH! WHAT IS THIS? IS THIS A PLACE TO RUN? THIS IS HOME NOT A PLAYGROUND…..AAYUSH GETS SCARED…..MAHI TRIES TALKING BUT RAGINI STOPS HER AND SAYS NO NOT TODAY….

WHEN WILL AAYUSH LEARN TO BEHAVE AND BE MORE MATURE….YOU ARE 6 YEARS OLD….LAKSH COMES FROM BEHIND AND SEES RAGINI SCOLDING AAYUSH AND SEES TEARS IN AAYUSH’S EYES….LAKSH RUNS TO RAGINI AND SHOUTS AT HER….LAKSH SAYS RAGINI WHY ARE YOU YELLING AT AAYUSH? RAGINI SAYS LAKSH DID YOU NOT SEE…HE WAS RUNNING IN THIS HOUSE LIKE IT’S HIS PARK….LAKSH SAYS SO WHAT RAGINI? HE IS A SMALL KID…RAGINI SAYS SMALL….LAKSH HE IS 6….HE SHOULD BE MATURE…..LAKSH SAYS HE IS JUST A LITTLE KID RAGINI…..SHE SAYS WELL HE SHOULD BE MORE MATURE….IF RAG….INTERUPPTED….LAKSH SAYS DON’T SPEAK OF HER NAME…..
RAGINI SAYS WHY? YOU CAN’T HEAR THE TRUTH RIGHT….WELL THAT IS….WHEN SHE WAS AROUND AAYUSH’S AGE SHE HAD A SHARP MIND AND SHE WAS WAY MATURE THAN AAYUSH….LAKSH I AM TELLING YOU….TEACH AAYUSH TO BE LIKE HER OR ELSE….LAKSH SHOUTS OR ELSE WHAT HUH? AND WHY SHOULD AAYUSH BECOME LIKE RAGYA? SO HE CAN DO THE SAME THING SHE DID WITH US? EVERYDAY IT’S RAGYA! RAGYA! RAGYA! ARREY SHE IS GONE RAGINI NOW IT’S ONLY AAYUSH…..WHEN WILL YOU STOP BRINGING RAGYA IN EVERYTHING? AAYUSH REMEMBERS HIS SISTERS TELLING HIM ABOUT RAGYA….AAYHIRA HATE THEIR SIBLINGS BECAUSE OF WHAT THEY DID WITH THEIR PARENTS….RAGINI SAYS LAKSH RAGYA WAS WAY BETTER THAN AAYUSH…LAKSH SHOUTS WHAT THE HELL RAGINI? EVEN THOUGH THEY DID ALL THAT WITH US YOU STILL SUPPORT RAGYA….

I CAN’T BELIEVE YOUR SAYING THIS RAGINI…EVERYDAY YOU KEEP CHANTING RAGYA! RAGYA! RAGYA! WHAT ABOUT AAYUSH HUH? HE IS ALSO YOUR SON….RAGINI SAYS SO? RAGYA WAS MY DAUGHTER….LAKSH IS SHOCKED….HE SAYS “MY DAUGHTER” RAGINI SHE WAS ALSO MY BLOOD….RAGINI REALIZES WHAT SHE SAID AND SAYS LA…LAKSH I…I…I AM SORRY….LAKSH SLOWLY MOVES BACK WHILE RAGINI FEELS BAD….AAYHIRA LOOK AT RAGLAK….MAHI GOES TO CALL SWASANSAHUTT…..THEY COME DOWN….LAKSH SAYS RAGINI I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU SAID THIS….HOW CAN YOU SAY MY DAUGHTER OR MY SON? THEY BOTH ARE OURS…RAGINI SAYS LAK…LAKSH PLEASE FORGIVE ME….LAKSH SHOUTS NO RAGINI I CAN’T….I CAN’T DO THIS ANYMORE…..FOR THE LAST 3 YEARS YOU HAVEN’T GONE A SINGLE DAY WITHOUT SAYING RAGYA….
IT’S LIKE SHE IS YOUR ONLY WORLD….WHAT ABOUT ME AND AAYUSH? ARE WE NOTHING TO YOU? EVERYDAY RAGINI every day you have been shouting at me and aayush…there was not a single day in all these three years that you have ever talked lovingly or softly with us….ragini says lak…laksh please I am sorry….laksh says how many times will you say sorry? You’ve been doing that for the past 3 years but then you keep doing the same mistake over and over again….what is your problem ragini? I agree after ragya left you became this hard at heart but in all this you forgot us? You forgot me and aayush…

In these 3 years you only cared about ragya…ragya…ragya that’s it….you forgot that just because she left you still have your husband and son….ragini says laksh…..he cries and says no ragini you tell me…in these 3 years how much time and love have you given to me or aayush? Hmm let me think ragini…oh right none of your time…why? Because you were still stuck on ragya….I constantly kept telling you that there is no point and I told you that one day you will become so engrossed in ragya leaving us that you will have no one with you and see that is exactly what is happening…ragya and samar/aryan left by their own will….they chose not to hear us once…I don’t understand that if we all moved on then why can’t you? You are still stuck where you were 3 years ago…
Ragini says laksh you won’t understand a mother’s pain of losing her child….this time swara and uttara speak up…swara says wait a minute ragini…what did you just say? Bhai won’t understand a mother’s love? Then what about father’s love? Ragini says it’s different…uttara says how bhabhi….we even lost our kid….ragini says I know but still….laksh says what? What are you trying to say? Ragini says maybe swara and uttara didn’t love their child as much as I loved ragya…all are shocked….swara gets teary eyed and sanskar says di how can you say this? Swara loved Samar with all her heart….even sahil did…

Sanskar says I can’t believe your saying this….ragini says whatever it is…I want my daughter back….laksh gets angry…he can’t control anymore and shouts MY DAUGHTER! MY DAUGHTER! MY DAUGHTER! Oh god ragini she was also my daughter too….I miss her very much…ragini huffs and says really? I don’t see a time when I saw you cry for ragya….everyone is shocked…especially laksh….he says ragini….how can you say this…ragini says I’m saying the truth laksh…tell me when have you cried for ragya huh? Swara and uttara remember there brother crying 3 years ago but then he told them he wouldn’t cry in front of ragini to make her feel better and she doesn’t lose confidence….swara wanted to speak up but laksh nods no….sansah notice and realize laksh was in a very bad shape from after ragya left but controlled for ragini and she is misunderstanding her own husband…

They all nod in disbelief and laksh says I can’t believe you are questioning my fatherhood ragini….I can answer this question ragini but can you answer mine? Why could you not give the same amount of love to aayush? She is stunned…she said I have loved aayush and cared for him equally….laksh says oh really? When? When he was hungry you gave him food….when he couldn’t sleep you made him sleep but where is the affection a mother is supposed to have for her kid….did you spend a mother-son time with aayush? Did you come/go anywhere with aayush? You missed his moments…when he started walking you weren’t there….when he started talking you weren’t there…when he started laughing, crying, eating you weren’t there….why? because you would always keep yourself locked in a room crying for ragya…in all these 3 years you missed out aayush’s moments because you were too busy thinking about the one who left us…didn’t care for us….ragya made us outsiders and you were too busy thinking about her….

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Look at swasansahutt even though they lost their kid they were still able to give time to their other kid and their husband…but you…you missed out everything ragini…everything….more than that it was aayush’s first day today na? I told you to come and drop him to school with me but what did you do? You said no…you said laksh go drop aayush…you didn’t bother coming to his school especially on his first day of starting school….where is your mother duties now? And you say you did them…

Ragini realizes that she actually missed a lot and says laksh I know I did wrong but….laksh says enough ragini….in all these 3 years you missed this much I don’t know how you will handle the other years…laksh says I am giving you a choice….I really hope you will choose the one you are comfortable with….ragini stands confused and swasansahutt think what is he talking about? Laksh says either you can decide to think about what I said and try giving a mother’s love to aayush or give me a divorce….yes ragini divorce…she is shocked and tears well up in her eyes…she says laksh what are you saying? Laksh says I’m right…I tried for 3 years to make things better but you yourself didn’t give a chance to others and now I can’t tell you what to do…if you want you can divorce me BUT I will take aayush’s custody….everyone is shocked….
SCREEN SHIFTS TO SOME GODOWN

The camera rolls and there is a pole where three kids are held captive…they were beaten poorly and were in a worst condition….the goons were there keeping an eye on them….one guy tied against the pole whispers….di where are we? The girl says I don’t know Samar…I just opened my eyes…..Aryan says how long were we here till? They look around and see goons…they get scared….the goons notice them awake and call someone….the goon says sir they are awake…the man from the other side good keep an eye I’ll be there….
SCREEN SHIFTS BACK TO MM

Ragini says you can’t separate a mother from her son…laksh laughs and says mother? From what right can you claim yourself to be aayush’s mother? In these 3 years you didn’t give him a mother’s love then what can I expect now? I tried ragini…I thought that okay ragya is gone so you will need some time…I gave time to you but you still couldn’t give aayush a mother’s love…and now look at us….it’s been 3 years ragini…3 years….where do we stand? You lost in thoughts about ragya who didn’t bother caring for us….me trying to mend our relationship but you never giving a chance…you were always so busy in your own thoughts…and aayush who didn’t get a mother’s love….you weren’t there for him in his special moments of his life ragini….I’ve decided I will let you be free…but the decision is yours….do you want to give divorce to me or actually try to be a good mother to aayush….

Laksh leaves and the kids follow him…raina says bade papa wait…ragini falls and cries…..swasansahutt come….ragini looks up and says do you agree too? All at once say yes….bhai/laksh is right….you really were so lost in ragya’s thoughts that you forgot about your other child and your husband….and you know what bhabhi swara says…..ragini nods….swara says the pain you went through…bhai went through more pain….you were blaming him na that he didn’t show his concern for ragya and all….you are wrong…after ragya left he was in a miserable state…..I still remember that day…
3 YEARS AGO FLASHBACK

Swasanraglaksahutt reached the railway station….they looked everywhere….they asked a vendor and he said those kids were sitting on the bench and then he doesn’t know where they went but a train came so they probably sat on there….they were shocked….all were walking lifeless on the sidewalk when swara kicked a suitcase….she bends down to pick it up but saw that it had sarya’s things in them…she noticed a picture and called others….they all were happy that maybe they were there somewhere but they spotted like a receipt of the tickets so they assumed they actually left….ragini picks the picture up and it is of aayhira (if you guys remember last episode I said a pic fell out the suitcase) they all cry and laksh is very much hurt and in shock….swara and uttara notice this and they don’t want their brother to go into depression…when they came home everyone got busy with something and swautt saw laksh go out…

They followed him and saw he was near a river…..swara knew he would jump so she shouted bhaiiiii….she holds him and pulls him back….uttara says bhai what were you doing? Laksh cries hard and says I lost my daughter today…the same one who I held in my hands…I gave love to…she left us…she didn’t bother to know the actual truth….swautt try to calm him down…laksh says I can’t live without my daughter please get me my daughter back….swautt console him and he falls on his knees…they go down and hug laksh….uttara says bhai if you die then what about bhabhi and aayush? You have them na? Laksh thinks about ragini and aayush and stops crying and says yes chutki you are right…I will have to be strong for my two dear ones….
Swautt nod and hug laksh…he hugs them back and says I love you both….swautt says I love my bhai too….they head home and laksh goes to his room
FLASHBACK ENDSSSS

Ragini hears all this and is shocked….she says oh god laksh was this much depressed and I kept thinking about myself….oh god now what do I do? Swara says go to him…..spend time with him and make him the old laksh…because of all this he has become stone hearted….please bhabhi bring our old bhai back…ragini promises and runs to her room…..
SCREEN FREEZES ON A CRYING RAGINI…..

PRECAP: HUME CHODO PLEASE…TUMLOG HUME ALAG NAHI KAR SAKTE…..WHAT DID WE DO? WHY HAVE YOU KEPT US HERE? SOMEONE SAYS SHUT UP JAISE FAMILY WAISE HE UNKE BACHE…..THEY ARE SHOCKED….WHAT HAPPENED TO THE MM FAMILY??? EVERYONE BROKE APART??? WILL THEY BE TOGETHER LIKE A HAPPY FAMILY OR IS SOMETHING AWAITING FOR THEM? WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO NA JAANA DIL SE DOOR???

GUYS I AM GETTING FEW COMMENTS…PLEASE TELL ME IF YOU FIND THE STORY BORING? I WILL WORK ON IT BUT PLEASE MY EVERYDAY READERS DON’T STOP READING IT….I WRITE FOR YOU ALL BUT IF I DON’T GET MUCH FEEDBACK THEN I WILL JUST NOT WRITE ANYMORE…I WRITE SO MUCH FOR YOU ALL BUT I WILL STOP….I KNOW I AM SOUNDING A BIT RUDE BUT HONSETLY I HAVE SCHOOL TOO….I CAN BE DOING THAT BUT ONLY FOR YOU I TRY POSTING EVERYDAY AND WHEN I LOGIN AND SEE THE FEEDBACK THEN I DON’T SEE MUCH COMMENTS….THAT PROVES THAT PEOPLE HAVE LOST INTEREST…IF YOU WANT ME TO STOP WRITING THEN TELL ME….I DO THIS ONLY FOR MY READERS SO PLEASE SUPPORT ME
3 YEARS LATER AGES:
RAGYA: 17 YEARS OLD
SAMAR: 15 YEARS OLD
ARYAN: 18 YEARS OLD
AAYUSH: 6 YEARS OLD
MAHI: 10 YEARS OLD
RAINA: 9 YEARS OLD

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