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Manan OS : Mann Chala – teri ore

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Manan OS : Mann Chala – teri ore

Story starts with a consert…there was a lot of crowd hooting & cheering saying “Fab-5” !!!

Lights fall on the stage..four people were standing on the stage with a proud smirk…a swt girl with piano wearing a pink dress named aliya, a hot & beautiful girl wearing a black dress with a electric guiter named mukti, a cute shy type boy with a normal guiter named dhruv & a handsome cool type boy with drums named Cabir were on the stage…

Suddenly a boy came slowly on stage with a electric guiter humming a song…

“Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa… yaara! ”

Crowds became crazy watching him on the stage…everyone hooted saying ‘manik !!’ Girls were going crazy over him…He looked at his friends & smiled…then he looked towards the crowds & started singing :

“Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2) ”

Manik finished his song..whole crowd shouted saying “once more ! Once more ! ”

But fab5 left from the stage.. They went towards the green room in their famous style with attitude… They entered in the green room & sat on their chairs…

Aliya : it was so much fun..so many peoples..OMG !!!
Manik : it’s obvious aliya..we r one of the most famous bands of the country yaar…
Mukti : r8…
Cabir : guys..we have a consert request in an orphanage tomorrow…
Dhruv : orphanage??
Cabir : the owner of the orphanage has specially requested us..they r doing it for charity…
Aliya : fab5 will sing for charity !!! Seriously???
Manik : what’s wrong in that aliya?! If we can help anyone.. It’s good na???
Dhruv : I think manik is r8..we should do that..
Aliya : ok..as u guys wish…
Cabir : then I’ll confirm the consert..
Manik : ok…

Fab5 went to Malhotra mansion & had party whole night…then they became tired & slept in respective rooms…

In the morning everyone joined for breakfast..
Manik : good morning guys..sleep well??
Cabir : we slept well..but what about our love birds “aliya & dhruv” ?? Did u guyz slept or????
Aliya : shut up cabir…
Manik : guyz u remember na..today’s orphanage concert??
Mukti : of course.. After breakfast.. We’ll leave for that as we have to go pune..what say??
Manik : yeah.of course..do u know the address cabir??
Cabir : I’ve the address of the house of orphanage owner..they’ll take us to the orphanage..
Manik : ok..
They had their breakfast & then left for pune together…

They reached there at afternoon…
Manik : cabir..what was the address of the owner??
Cabir : It’s Murthy Mansion near the highway…
Cabir gave manik the full address..
They reached there with the help of GPS…
They got down from the jeep & looked at the mansion…

Mukti : wow !!! What a mansion!!
Cabir : r8 yaar..it’s beautiful..
Manik : stop it .let’s go inside…
All went inside..a servant came & told them to sit…

They sat on the hall…after sometime Mr.Murthy came there & greeted them..

Mr.Murthy : thank u so much fab5 for accepting the request….
Manik : it’s our pleasure…

Suddenly they heard a sound of laughing from the corridor…

Fab5 looked towards the area..but they weren’t able to see the girl..

Mr.Murthy : my daughter..Nandini..actually she runs the orphanage & it was her idea to call u for a concert..she is ur big fan..
Cabir : our fan ?? Or just manik’s??

Manik gave him an angry look…

Mr.Murthy : for the answer..u have to ask her the question…
Mr.Murthy called the servant & told him to show fab5 their room & take care of them…then he left…

Servant : come sir…
Fab5 were following the servant..but manik’s mind was struck in the sound of laugh..manik tried to see nandini..nandini was wearing a yellow & blue combination lehenga..her hair was curled..a small chain was placed in her waist…nandini’s back were facing manik…so he couldn’t saw her face..nandini was standing in the corridor with a girl who was wearing a salwar suit..manik tried to see nandini’s face but failed…
Cabir called manik…
Cabir : manik..what r u doing there?!come…
Manik : yeah..coming…

They reached into their respective rooms & took rest..manik’s mind was revolving around nandini..He wanted to see her…

At evening Mr.Murthy called them at hall for the concert..they came at the hall…..
Mr.Murthy : so..let’s go??
Manik : umm..ur daughter won’t come?? I mean she called us na??
Mr.Murthy : she is already there..
Manik : oh..oky…

Cabir whispered in manik’s ear : u have a lot of interest in his daughter!!
Manik whispered back : it’s nothing lyk that…
Cabir again whispered : I saw u were trying to see her when she was in the corridor…
Manik whispered back : shut ur mouth…

They sat on a BMW & left for the orphanage…
They reached in the orphanage.. It was a big orphanage.. It was nicely decorated for the concert…

Aliya : wow..I never thought an orphanage can b so big & beautiful..
Mukti : moreover so high class arrangement for the concert !!

A big crowd was gathered there to watch fab5’s performance…

Cabir : so many crowd !! It’s going to b a rocking concert..
Manik : the aim of the concert will also b fulfilled perfectly I guess…

They reached to the green room & started to getting ready for the performance.. Manik wore a black shirt with black jeans & black jacket..he came outside of the greenroom…he saw some kids & called them…

Manik : hi..do u know nandini??
One kid replied saying : nandini didi !! Yeah..we all know her..she is really nice…
Manik : do u know where is she??
That kid showed a direction with her finger saying : she is there…
Manik : ok..thank u…

Manik went towards that direction… A girl was standing there wearing the same lehenga & talking on phone..but this tym also her back was faced to manik..manik was mesmerized to listen her voice..he was about to call her & stopped listening cabir’s voice..

Cabir : manik..what r u doing there?? Come fast..we have to go on the stage…
Manik took a deep breath & went to cabir with disappointment…
They came to stage…whole crowds became crazy over them…

Manik’s eyes searched nandini in the whole crowd but couldn’t spot her…

Manik remembered her laugh,her voice,her hair,chain in her waist…he smiled remembering them & started singing “baatein kuch ankahi si”..he also sang jeena jeena,love me thora aur, parindey…

Nandini was standing in the backstage & listening their songs..finally the songs gets over..navya came & took her from there saying nandini’s father is calling her…nandini was going with navya..fab5 got down from the stage..manik was talking with others when he again saw nandini from behind…
He was about to follow nandini when Mr.Murthy’s P.A came & took them safely to the murthy mansion…

They reached in the mansion.. Mr.Murthy was waiting there for them..they came inside…

Mr Murthy : I’m sorry that I’d to leave early from there..
Manik : it’s ok..
Mr. Murthy : u all were rock by the way..
Cabir looked at manik…
Cabir : thank u Mr. Murthy..but we haven’t meet with nandini yet..where is she??
Manik looked at him & cabir winked at manik..
Mr. Murthy : oh..wait for a moment…

Mr.Murthy called navya..navya came there..cabir was mesmerized to see her…
Mr.Murthy : navya..bring nandini..they wants to meet her…
Navya : ok uncle…

Navya went upstair… Manik was getting impatient to see her..

Navya brought nandini holding her hand…
Manik was lost in her beautiful eyes with big eyelash,chubby cheeks,soft pink lips….
Nandini was coming downstair holding navya’s hand..she missed a stair & was about to fall down..but navya held her…
Navya : nandini..careful..
Nandini : yeah…
Navya held her hand tightly & was bringing her downstair safely..

Fab5 was confused to see that..Mr.Murthy understood their confusion…
Mr.Murthy : nandini can’t see anything…
Fab4 & Manik looked at him shockingly..
Mr.Murthy : she lost her eyesight 3years ago in an accident..

Manik was shocked to know that..he looked at her…
Cabir : didn’t u take her for treatment???
Mr. Murthy : We tried a lot..we took her to many countries,many specialists..but nothing worked..we still didn’t left hope..my frnd suggested me a doctor.. He lives in USA..His 99% cases are successful.. But Nandini didn’t agree to go there..she lost all her hopes..she said she doesn’t want anymore false hopes.. She doesn’t want to break her heart again.. She said she is happy lyk this..she can feel everything..she has compromised with her fate..navya still tries to make her understand.. But she doesn’t listen to anyone…

Manik was looking at her..he became numb…whole fab4 became silent & felt bad for her…but manik could feel her pain…

Navya & Nandini came to them…Mr.Murthy came close to nandini…
Mr.Murthy : chutki…look..who wants to meet u !!
Nandini : who appa???
Navya : fab5..
Nandini : fab5 !! They r here appa??
Mr.Murthy : yes chutki…

Fab4 came near her…cabir extended his hand towards Nandini saying : Hi nandini !! I’m cabir…
Navya took nandini’s hand & gave it to cabir’s hand for handshake.. Cabir smiled at navya..navya also smiled back…
Nandini : hi cabir…
Dhruv also shaked hand with nandini with help of navya…
Mukti came near her & hugged her…
Mukti : Hi..nandini..I’m mukti..it’s so nyc to meet u…
Alya : yeah..u r so beautiful nandini..by the way..I’m aliya..
Aliya also hugged her…

Nandini : It’s really very nyc to see u all..u guys r really frndly..but where is Manik?? Woh I’m a big fan of Manik..I wanted to meet him personally from my clg days..but I couldn’t…
Cabir : finally got my answer.. My guess was right..u r a manik’s fan..

Manik wiped his tears secretly & went to her with smile…he held her hand…

Manik : guess who is it??
Nandini : manik !!

Manik was mesmerized to listen his name from her beautiful voice..he felt so connected with her…

Manik : yes..it’s manik..
Nandini : u know..I’ve listened all ur & fab5’s song..u guyz r great..I wanted to see u in reality from my clg tyms..now when u r really in front me..I can’t see u…but still I can feel everything… Thank u sooo much for accepting my request & coming here for the orphanage..

Manik was lost in her voice & continuous talking…fab4 noticed that..

Nandini : manik..r u listening??.

Manik came to his sense..

Manik : yeah..of course..
Nandini : I’m sorry if I bored u..
Manik : it’s nothing lyk that..in fact u know I was lost in ur voice !!

Nandini smiled listening that…she left his hand..

Nandini : I hope u guys r staying here tonight…

Mr.Murthy looked at manik with a hope ..manik looked at others..they blinked their eyes in assurance…

Manik : of course…
Nandini became happy listening that..
Nandini : great..!! Then u guys go & take rest as u all must b tired after the concert…
Manik : yeah…
Nandini : kaka !!!!
One old servant came…

Servant : yes beta…
Nandini : they r going to their rooms..send juice for them in their rooms…
Servant : ok beta…

Servant left…

Navya : Nandini..u should also take some rest..let’s go…
Nandini : OK..bye guys..
Fab5 : bye…

Navya took nandini to her room..manik was staring there until she left…fab4 noticed that also…

Mr. Murthy came to fab5..
Mr.Murthy : thank u so much.. After the accident.. I’m first watching her so happy…
Cabir : it was our pleasure Mr. Murthy…
Mr.Murthy : then u all go & take rest..I’ll see u later..

Mr.Murthy left from there & fab5 also went to their room..manik couldn’t remove nandini from his mind..fab4 came to his room…

Manik : u all here?? What happened??
Dhruv : buddy..do u want to say something??
Manik : about what??
Mukti : we r not blind manik..we can see ur interest towards nandini…
Manik : it’s nothing lyk that..
Cabir : stop hiding it & share ur feelings..
Manik : I don’t know yaar..from the moment I heard her voice I’m just attracted to her..I’m feeling a strange connection towards her..I don’t know why but I want to know her more…
Aliya : it can’t b just sympathy.. U r feeling attraction towards a girl who can’t see anything at all ?!
Dhruv : it’s not the fact aliya..if u would blind..I would still love u..
Manik : where does this love comes from?!
Dhruv : I was just giving example to aliya…
Mukti : what u want to do manik??
Manik : I want to stay here for some days..if I go back tomorrow I won’t b able to find peace…

Fab4 looked at each other & then looked at manik..
Cabir : ok done..let’s take it as a tour..
Fab3 : done…
Manik : thanks guys…
They had a group hug..then they left for their respective rooms & slept..

At morning manik’s sleep broke by a beautiful & melodious voice..a girl was playing veena & singing…

He came out from his room & started to follow the voice..he reached in front of a room..he opened the door slowly… He saw nandini was sitting on the floor playing veena.. Fab4 also came out of their room & joined manik…Nandini didn’t realise their arrival & started singing…

Haan aa o…

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon…

Saari hadein meri ,ab maine tod di..
Dekhar mujhe pata ,awaargi ban gaye..

Haan hasi ban gaye..
Haan nami ban gaye…
Tum mere aasmaan…
Meri zameen ban gaye…

Aa…o..aa….

Suddenly a vas fall by aliya’s mistake.. Fab4 tapped their forehead..
Aliya : sorry !!

Nandini stopped singing immediately..
Nandini : who’s there??
Manik : umm..fab5…
Nandini : woh..come inside..
All came inside…
Aliya : sorry if we dstrbd u..
Cabir : not we..u..
Aliya : whatever ..
Nandini : no one dstrbd me..in fact I dstrbd ur sleeping.. I’m sorry..it’s my habit to practice at morning..
Manik : u don’t have to b sorry..ur voice is really beautiful nandini..
Mukti : of course..u have amazed fab5..
Dhruv : ur voice is really special..
Nandini : thank u so much guys…by the way..r u all going today??
Manik : no.. We haven’t visit pune before..so we’ve planned to spend some days here..
Nandini : It’s great..then stay here..u can travel anywhere from here..
Cabir : itz ok..we’ll shift in some hotel..
Mr.Murthy : no need..we will b happy if u stay here…
Nandini : appa..gd mrning..
Mr.Murthy : gd morning dear…
Manik : we’ll stay here in one condition.. Nandini will take us different places everyday…
Nandini : me??
Navya : she will..
Navya came inside the room & stand beside nandini holding her…
Navya : nandini will take u many dfrnt places as nandini knows the whole city…
Nandini smiled : so u guys will stay here?
Fab5 : done !!

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All left for their respective rooms..at afternoon they all went to travel ..manik was getting close with nandini..he was trying to know her more lyk what she lykes what she dislyks..Nandini was also lyking to spend tym with manik…
Soon manik started to realise his feelings for nandini..he started to love her innocence, her talkative nature, her cuteness, her smile, her voice…every single thing of her…

One day manik took her to a beautiful garden..
Nandini : manik..where r we???
Manik : it’s a garden..u know it’s really beautiful…it is full of dfrnt kinds of flowers..
Nandini : really???
Manik : yeah..come here…
Manik took her hand & made her touch a flower…
Manik : look..it’s an yellow rose…It’s really beautiful just lyk u
He made her touch a dfrnt flower…
Nandini smiled…
Manik : & it’s orchid…
He made her touch dfrnt kinds of flowers & also told their colors,how they r looking…
Suddenly rain started…
Manik : Oops..nandini..let’s go..fast..

Manik tried to take her with him & but nandini was still standing there..

Manik : nandini..what r u doing?? It’s raining..come na…
Nandini : yeah manik..It’s raining..it’s my fvrt thing..after so many years I’m enjoying it again…

Nandini started to enjoy the rain by closing her eyes & spreading her arms…Manik admired her..he saw her that happy for the first tym…

Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor…

(Nandini was dancing in the rain & continuously laughing.. Manik was admiring her innocence..)

Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor…

(Nandini was continuously laughing & jumping on the muds..she was also splashing the water with her foot..she called manik to join her..)

Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor…

(Manik came to nandini.. Nandini asked her to jump on the muds & splash water lyk her..manik 1st hesitant..but nandini insisted him…then manik also started to do lyk her…& he also started to enjoying it…)

Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

(Both were splashing the rain waters to each other & laughing loudly..)

Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

(Nandini started to twirling feeling the rain…a bright smile was on her lips…Manik was admiring her with a smile..she was about to fall but manik caught her immediately & made her stand..he told nandini to b careful..but nandini started to laughing & enjoying…manik kept on staring at her…)

suddenly manik held her hand & pulled her close…
Nandini : what happened manik??
Manik came near her..he cupped her face & kissed on her forehead…
Manik : I love you Nandini..
Nandini became numb
Nandini : do u know what r u saying?!
Manik : I know nandini. I really love u.
Nandini : no..it’s just ur infatuation.. It’s ur sympathy for me manik…
Manik : do u really think it’s my sympathy?? Don’t u feel anything for me the way I feel for u?? Tell the truth nandini…
Nandini : it’s not right manik..it’s all wrong..manik..u can’t love a blind girl & can’t expect to spend ur lyf with her..
Manik : why r u blocking all the happiness to come in ur lyf nandini?? U can b normal if u want..u just have to show ur courage..there r chances for u to recover..then why don’t u agree to take the chance??
Nandini : there are chances manik..not guarantee..I don’t want to break my heart again by a false hope..
Manik : hopes r not false nandini..& I don’t want any guarantee.. If u won’t b able to see again..that’s ok..u’ll see by my eyes..u’ll see everything from my point of view..& we’ll spend our lyf happily…
Nandini : manik…
Manik : don’t u love me nandini??
Nandini : it’s impossible manik..I don’t want to spoil ur lyf bcz of me.. I’m sorry…
Manik : nandini…
Nandini left from there immediately…Manik stood for a moment there & followed her…he stopped her helding her hand..
Manik : nandini..wait..where r u going?! U don’t know the route ok??
Nandini : I’ll go wherever I want…
Manik : shut up..come..
He took nandini with her & made her sit on the car…he also sat on the driver seat & started the car…
Whole journey was quiet..the girl who always keeps on talking she is totally silent today.. Manik kept on looking at her repeatedly..
Nandini : stop looking at me & drive the car perfectly…
Manik : who told u I’m looking at u?!
Nandini : I’m blind that’s not mean I can’t feel anything or I can’t understand anything…
Manik : if u could feel.. U would’ve felt the depth of my love..if u could understand.. U would’ve understand what everyone is trying to say & u would take one more chnc…
Nandini : Manik !!!! Leave it…
Again there was awkward silence… Both were lost in their own thoughts..

Both reached Murthy Mansion… Nandini directly went to her room..Manik also went to his room..both chngd their dresses & freshened up..Manik asked a servant to bring warm milk..servant brought it…he took the milk & went to nandini’s room…he knocked the door..but nandini was lost in her thoughts…Manik came inside…
Manik : over thinking is not going to help u..
Nandini : when did u came?!
Manik : that doesn’t matter..I’ve bring milk for u..drink it…
Nandini : I don’t lyk milk…
Manik : still u have to drink it as I’m saying..
Nandini : manik !!!
Manik : nandini !!!
Nandini : fine…
Nandini drank the whole milk..
Manik : gd girl..now sleep..gd n8..
Nandini : gd n8…
Manik left from the room & went to his room…he saw fab4 were waiting for him there…
Aliya : manik..what’s happening between u & nandini??
Manik : I love her…
Mukti : what??? R u serious ?? Manik.. How can u think ur lyf with her..?!
Manik : why?? What’s wrong in her??
Mukti : manik…come to reality.. She is…
Manik : blind…but still she has chances to b alright..& if she stay lyk this forever.. Then also I’ve no prblm with her as I love her…I can see & that’s enough for us..I will take care of her & she will see everything with my eyes..
Cabir : r u sure manik???
Manik : 100%
Cabir : then I’m with u..
Manik : thnx yaar…
Both looked at the others…fab3 looked at each other…then smiled…
Fab3 : we r also with u…
Fab5 had a group hug..then they left for their rooms..

In nandini’s room :

Navya : he really loves u a lot..u r lucky nandu…
Nandini : I know..but I don’t want to spoil his lyf..
Navya : r u sure??
Nandini : yeah…
Navya : still I’ll say think again..such love never comes again..gd n8..
Navya left from there..nandini kept on thinking…

In the morning all were sitting in the breakfast table…everyone finished their breakfast… Mr.Murthy was about to leave for office when manik called him…
Mr.Murthy : yes beta…say…
Manik : uncle.. I wanted to say…I love nandini & I want to marry her…
Mr.Murthy was shocked….
Mr.Murthy : I hope u know what r u saying…
Manik : yeah I know..but I don’t understand why u all r behaving in this way..what’s wrong in her?!! She can’t see..it’s not her fault..
Nandini : manik !! Why r u repeating the same topic?!
Manik : bcz we love each other..yes..u love me nandini..& u can’t deny the truth…
Nandini : fine..I won’t deny..yes..I love u..but still I don’t want to spoil ur lyf..
Manik : & how’ll u spoil my lyf???
Nandini : u know it manik…
Manik : no..I don’t know nandini..f9..u can’t see but how’ll it spoil my lyf?! I can see & it’s enough for us live happily…
Nandini : manik…forget it…
She left from there…
Manik : uncle..I…
Mr.Murthy kept his hand on manik’s head…
Mr.Murthy : u have my blessing.. I lyk u & I know u r prfct for my daughter.. God bless u my son….
Manik took his blessing & hugged him..
Mr.Murthy : go & make that fool understand…
Mr.Murthy left for office & manik went to nandini’s room & sat beside her..
Nandini : manik..
Manik cupped her face…
Manik : I know what u r scared of..but u will never b a burden in my lyf..u will b the star of my lyf..I prmiz..I won’t let u feel guilty if u say yes..nandini..we will b each other’s support.. I won’t force u to start ur treatment again as it doesn’t matter for me..cz I will b ur eyes..we will always stay happy..nandini..do u trust me??

Tears fall from her eyes & she nodded in yes…
Manik : then plz..accept me in ur lyf..plzzzz !
Nandini hugged him immediately…
Nandini : I love you manik..I love u a lot…
Manik : I love you too nandini….
After sometime both left each other..manik wiped her tears…
Manik : from now..no tears..only happiness….
Fab4 comes there…
Mukti : I hope we r not dstrbing u…
Manik : come…
They congratulated manan & started teasing them..they had a great tym together…

At evening…Mr.Murthy came home..sevant told him that nandini is calling him..he went to her room immediately…
Mr.Murthy : what happened chutki?? Do u need something??
Nandini : Appa..u told me about a doctor na who lives in USA…
Mr.Murthy : yeah..but why???
Nandini : I want to go to him…
Mr.Murthy : u…really???
Nandini : yes appa..I want to take the chnc…I want see manik appa…I want to become normal again…
Mr Murthy becomes overwhelmed listening it…he blessed nandini…
Mr.Murthy : I’ll make the arrangement.. We’ll leave tomorrow…

He went to manik’s room & thanked him..manik became happy listening the news…he immediately went to see nandini…

Manik : nandini..is it true?? U want to start ur treatment ??
Nandini : yes..manik..I want to do it for myself..I want to see u & I want b ur support in every meaning…
Manik hugged nandini tightly…
Manik : I’m really happy nandini..& yeah..I’ll also come with u…
Nandini : of course manik..if I get back my eyesight na..I want to see u first…
Manik : I love u nandini…
Nandini : I love u too manik…

Next day Manik,Nandini & Mr.Murhy left for USA…

Dr. operated nandini’s eyes…bandage will b open after a week…
Manik took care of nandini perfectly the way doctor told him…only 1 day was left to open the bandage… Nandini was getting scared & quiet day by day..
Manik : nandini..let’s hope for the best…don’t b so scared…
Nandini : manik what if I still don’t recover ?!
Manik : nothing will happen… I told u na u will see everything by my eyes..so it’s ok if u don’t recover..
Nandini hugged him tightly… Manik also hugged her back…both were equally restless.. Manik was more tensed than nandini as he was thinking nandini’s heart will break if she won’t recover..how’ll he control her…
Fab4 also tried to confront manik but he didn’t calm down…this night was difficult for both manan..
Finally the darkness of the night was removed & sun shined to the fullest..

Doctor removed nandini’s bandage & told her to open her eyes slowly…
Nandini opened her eyes slowly…manik was standing in front of him with a smile which couldn’t cover his tension…
Nandini : manik !!!
Tears started to fall from her eyes..manik came to her immediately…
Manik : Nandini.. Plz don’t cry..it’s ok..I’m there for u na…don’t worry..I will b ur eyes..I…
Nandini : manik.. I can see u…
Manik : I know nandini..it’s ok..it’s…what?????? What did u say??
Nandini : I can see u manik..
Nandini smiled with her happy tears..
Manik : really???
He looked at the doctor ..doctor blinked his eyes in assurance…manik looked at her & caressed her eyes…
Manik : nandini..u…
Tears also started to fell from manik’s eyes…he hugged her tightly… Nandini also hugged him with equal force….
After a long hug both left each other..manik wiped her tears & kissed her eyes…..
Nandini : manik..appa??
Manik : he’s waiting outside.. He didn’t wanted to u see u broken..that’s why…
Doctor : I’m calling him…
Doctor left from there & sent Mr.Murthy inside…
Nandini : appa…
Mr.Murthy : nandini…kanna…
Both hugged each other & cried a lot…then Mr.Murthy went to manik..
Mr.Murthy : u r lyk a Angel in our lyf..thank u so much manik…
Manik hugged him..then Mr.Murthy took nandini’s hand & gave it to manik’s hand & blessed them…
They returned to their home…whole fab4 along with navya congratulated nandini…
Manik : nandini..u should also congratulate cavya…
Nandini : cavya???
Manik : I mean cabir & navya…
Nandini : what ??
Nandini looked at both confusingly..navya was blushing.. After some moment nandini realise it…
Nandini : OMG Navya !! So it was going on behind me ha???
She hugged navya tightly & congratulated both…then they had a group hug together… Manik held nandini’s hand during the hug..nandini looked at him & both smiled at each other…

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Manik closed his diary & caressed it…
Nandini came to the room…she was wearing a blue saree with a small chain on her waist & leaving her hair open..
Nandini : manik !! Again u r sitting with this diary?!! What’s in it which is so special for u???
Manik came near her & held her by waist…
Manik : nothing is special for me without u…
Nandini : manik !! Don’t u have to go office?! Go & get ready…
Manik : uhu..I don’t want to go…
Nandini : really?! Then what u want to do??
Manik : something lyk this…

Manik pushed her in the bed…both fall over each other.. Nandini was beneath manik…
Nandini : manik…
Manik : ssshhh…
Manik slowly went towards her lips..nandini closed her eyes feeling the proximity… Then manik’s lip slowly touched nandini’s lip & both kissed each other..then they celebrated their pure unconditional love….

So it was my 3rd OS : Mann Chala – teri ore…
Hope u all lykd it..do share ur feedbacks as I’ll b waiting… Till then –

#b_safe_n_stay_happy_&_spread_love ?

#Nishita

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