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UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-1)

hi,tamanna here….thank you so much for cmmnting…as many of u want happy ending..it will be happy ending…actually mujhe bi happy ending hi chahya tha…i wanted to tell u all igot thid idea from main hoon na film n doremon stand by me..crazy na…thank u so much for cmmnts.. love u…i have replaid to all of cmmnts…n soo-i m really sorry yaar i m a twinj [sidmin]fan…plz do keep reading my ff…n someone asked me about my age i want to introduce myself…
i leave in udupi, karnataka,India…i m 14 years old…i m in 9th std..have no brothers or sisters but have many frnds including u all..really a big crazy fan of sid, twinj [sidmin]..n also a fan of armaan malik…doremon..n hw can i forgot my tu ff writerts..i m obsessed fan of tu ff writers as i m inspired by u ll…fav songs-many depending upon the mood…but ‘bol dona zara’ all time fav..loves singing…interested in fashion designing n making frnds…

lets begin with my first episode…
a guy gets down from train with smoke of train all around him …a bag around his one arm…aww he is so cute… [if u have seen main hoo na film than u can imagine of shah rukh khans entry in train…as i loved the entry] he comes out of railway station…asu have guessed he is our kunj sarna…
A girl is shown crying at one corner room…her eyes are shown it is full of water…it is so cute….then her cheeks from which tears are continuosly flowing with pink blush on it…her nose is red like tomato…now her lips which is rosy pink from which she is murmuring something…
girl-papa…why u left me…i dont have mom…nw u also…why papa why…why only me…plz come back papa …i cant live without u…[n she starts to cry harder]…no twinkle no….ur strong..u cant cry..ur good girl..(quickly wipes her tears)[yes u guessed it right she is our twinkle]..
by saying this she puts the photo of rt in her bag n runs outside…
screen shifts to railway’s station..
here kunj is searching for network for his mobile…..

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ku-yaar mai ye kahan phas gaya…yahan par tho network bi nahi hai….aur is ladki ka photo bhi dwld nahi ho raha…ab mai ise kahan doonduga..
he is seeing mobile n doesnt look up…here tw is running n she doesnt notice kunj…then what..BANG!!!…both bangs with each other…
without looking at each other..
tw-i m sorry…

ku-(still looking at mob)what sorry haan..dekh kar nahi chal sakthi ky…..(suddenly looks at her face n gets lost….(he thinks)..yaar yeh kitni cute hai..but why is she crying??)
he moves his hand towards her face…she looks on..he wipes her tears..her hair is flowing..both are looking so cute n says
ku- yaar itni si baat ke liye koi rotha hai kya.. I m sorry.. now plz smile…
tw-(smiles) mai us baat ke liye nahi ro rahi thi..anyways leave it..bye..I have to go..
ku-(smiles)hasthi reh acchi lagthi hai..aur yeh kya Teri(pulling her nose) naak tamatar ho gai hai..
tw-(fake annoyed face)tumna…
before she could complete kunj runs away…
tw-(smiling to herself) jalla (mad)n walks away…
kunj-(having a broad smile on his face)-jalli (mad) par cute hai..,n walks away…
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so how was it??I didn’t thought I will post so soon…ur cmmnts made me do so!!! so plz keep commenting n supporting me….love u,
plz drop ur cmmnts…Whether +ve or -ve…
love u all…
bye…
TAMANNA,

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  1. awesome intresting tamanna loved it

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